I felt like I was going to cry earlier, but now I'm smiling at the ending.

What I found was surprising, to say the least, but after close scrutiny I decided that the metal band was not the One Ring, and that Trowa most likely was discussing marriage, a term I had of course heard of before but never expected to be partaking in.

Possibly my favorite line in the entire fic. Hahahaha! Though the codes were silly, too.

i like the fact that the end took place where it all started. congratulations on getting your fic finally finished. i really enjoyed reading it.

? duo cannot be dead. no no no. don't do that. i mean sure the chapter is already written but i don't want duo to be dead.

great chapter. i really like your writing style.

i like the sandwich referance. it's kinda cute. if i remember correctly heero doesn't have black hair though. i like your dialogues. they're intense.

tro's gundam is called heavyarms not strongarms...but i guess you know that by now. nice chappie.

i think i already read this chapter a long time ago. checking with your publishing date it just might be true. anyway i really like the beginning.

lol...cute ending...*looks around*. Good for you!

First sentence - you say "it didn't effect me". That's the wrong 'a/effect'; it should be spelt with an 'a'.

I love the little angst-bitlets you put in; they make my stomach do this strange little cold-shot thing that says 'ooh, angst, and it's so good and I feel it'. This is a good thing. You made it happen twice! _ *heaps kudos*

I'm not entirely certain what happened, because I'm not sure if the chapter is consistent - you begin with Heero 'stalking the door', which to me implies that he is outside the apartment, but then he is inside the apartment...? I'm confused.

Also, you start by saying he's standing in a position that others would find uncomfortable, but you never say what that position is.

I think you should say more about his reviewing the old missions to keep himself from going nuts.

Otherwise, a really vivid view into a different Heero than we're used to, and a good continuation of the previous section.

I love your first line - it grabbed my attention right away.

The ending sentence is kind of weak, though, so it could use some work, but I like the emotional morass you've made Duo into, and I think that his rambly, often-funny-even-when-he's-sad voice is charming and lovely. _

Plus the languages bit. I adore it - because I mean, really; you'd think someone would have figured out the puns with their names already. Good job.

OMG! OMG! Duo! No! You have to get them together! Please! *puppy eyes* Anyways, it was great! (as always... -_~-)

~Leila

So sad... but so sweet too.

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Have I told you that I love this story, so much lovely angst.

That was great! I think you've done a great job. I hope the scarring isn't too bad...not that Heero will care. *grin* I hope Duo can pull himself together. I know it'll be hard for him, but Heero's willing to wait, I think, now that he's found Duo. Good luck with the next chapter.