I'm guessing this story is dead, but it was nevertheless well written fun to read.

I have one request: If you aren't going to continue the story could you be persuaded to post an outline of what you had planned? I'd really like to know how it was going to end.

This story is so good. Totaly needs to be continued if you get the chance. Great Work!

Well, yeah, this doesn't adds up. Totalitarian state where HAPPINESS IS MANDATORY? Quietly evaporating undesirables would be standard procedure, not hatemob that for sure will prop up Grimm threat.

I liked both interludes.

Well, well, that starts well. One major character already killed off-screen. I guess title alone should already tip off that it is more grim(m) fanfic than usual.

I hope you come back to finish your story. Abandoning something this good is like, a felony against fanfiction.

Is there going to be a terrorist plot a la season 3? Are Weiss and Jaune going to have an affair? Will Sun get to experience a... Ninja of Love? Time better tell!

Its ok. I’m not sure what direction you’re trying to go tho

I found this today and instantly fell in love with it and read all the way through. I'm sure you hear this alot but I'm a picky reader so I usually don't read all the way through a story but I'm glued to this one. Keep up the good work and good luck with life.

I like this story, I am thoroughly intrigued in where the story is going, despite getting the dystopian romance Divergent vibes. I like your totalitarian state, it makes senseI and is actually quite benevolent compared to what most people would come up with. can see how to other people this would be a nightmare, but as a man who is jingoistic and desiring to be father, I can't help but laugh at there complaints.

I'm Not sure currently why you want to you want to send them to Beacon unless you want to mirror the events from the show. Which I can understand as a writer myself it's a lot easier when someone hands you the plot and let you mess around with it.

The fact that the way the council treats them makes me literally sick to my stomach tells me that you have a real talent. I just want to see more of it.

So glad to see that you're back. I know work can be a pain in the arse and I hope that life's treating you well. Take all the time you need. I've been here since the very beginning and love every chapter but of course I don't want the author to feel pressured to write or anything if they're busy or have writer's block. Good luck on this road called life.

...I keep hoping for the characters to be more likable. Somehow I stick around though since it is an interesting story idea.

*whispers* monster...

heh

I really like your story and stuff. good job m8

I lost interest in this story when they were expelled from Beacon. I was looking forward to their growth and felt it was leading to some huge incident involving Grimm where they prove their worth and save the day.

Then things got boring.

I am in love with this story! From the first chapter to now I am so enraptured by the story and the development and now I can’t wait for Jaune to put the ring on ruby’s Finger and maybe, possibly kiss on the lips. Btw their time to consummate is almost up right?