I'm begging u to update plzzzzz don't leave me in suspense

OHHHH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS YEESSSSSSS! this is amazing thank you so much for writing this. I love it so much. I really hope you continue it. I'm on team instinct and love spark soooo muh. Thank you for the awesome fic that is showing him as powerful.

Omg this cliffhanger doe u have to update plzzzz I'm a dying to learn more about what happensss

This is great, I read the comic this is based on somewhere and really loved it, and I hope you keep going!

OMG U HAVE TO CONTINUEEE PLZ DONT LEAVE ME HEREEEE

Nice, nice. I knew if I looked hard enough, I'd find a fic of that comic I saw online. I love this concept of Spark saving the other two leaders at the last minute. Thanks for writing this!
Now for some constructive criticism. I think it was take a lot longer than 20 minutes to make Candela and Blanche exhausted. When I first read that comic, I was under the impression that they had been fighting for at least 6 to 8 hours straight, maybe even a whole day, and team rocket isn't tired yet because they keep sending more reinforcements. And it would have been interesting to get a little more information on who exactly the Team Rocket leader is, because in the comic the leader looked like Blanche's twin sibling. Though I'm not sure if the comic came first, or if this fic came first and inspired that comic, so I can't really judge.

Wow... Spark went a little crazy there for a minute.

I'm not sure if this or the comic strip came first. Regardless, I love imagery and description used in this fic. It really captured the emotion of the moment. Well Done.

The comic was why I joined Instinct *Dab*, Awesome fic by the way, 2 more things, First it never occurred to me that someone could make a fic using this comic, Second If Spark had a lightning bolt scar over his eye(1) plus some headphones he could pass as Laxus Dreyar from Fairytail.

Was Zapdos controlling him? How did that work? Did it fuse itself with Spark? How had he encountered it beforehand? Is it his official Pokemon? Either way, I'm curious to see what happens next.

OK that was exactly the fic I wanted to read thanks for writing it I'm pretty sure you got it from that one really popular comic strip and I love what you did with it
Keep on the writes

Oh my gosh, so cute, so awesome. Amazing. No more comments.

That was amazing!

I. Love. This. It was really cool!

I was wondering if this was the comic I saw earlier tonight, and I was right! Though, if you are to continue this, the "dark thoughts," was that just thoughts consuming him or was that actually Zapdos communicating to him?