OMG

Oh~can’t wait to see the next chapter

I like this story. Keep it up! :)

I do hope this story is going to go well. We're dealing with some real magical stuff right here. Time freezing? That wouldn't be the first time I've seen that. Be sure to stay tuned for the next chapter.

Ooh, so Aylene managed to get Saurus Rock and her Time Stone to touch. What happens next I'll just have to wait and see.

Also, one grammar error.

"They had to get past those predators, but now there was no way she could get past them now."

You need to get rid of one of those "nows".

Also, instead of "the human and the Apatosaurus", maybe you could try "the two". Less wordy, you understand.

Well, anyway, update soon.

At the end of Chapter 16 the Time Stone fading is Aylene now stuck with Little Foot and the rest of his friends? How will Aylene get back home?

SHE DID IT! :D

oh boy things are about to get interesting

I'm glad you updated another chapter in this AWESOME Land Before Time retelling! The elements you added with the Time Stone and ancient power artifacts brings me Disney's Atlantis vibes, which would be incredible if you base this ancient or secret society on Atlantis ;) I hope you are okay due to the pandemic and the current riots due to the injustice for us minorities :( Please be safe, stay healthy! I hope you update ASAP! This story is getting more intense and magical ;D

AAAAAH! You're back! Am soooo happy! And you didn't even disappoint! Am so excited to know whether Littlefoot's suggestion even worked.

Absolutely fantastic to see this updated, certainly a very intense chapter indeed.

Oh Shit I wonder what will happen next

I wonder what happens next.

Awesome comeback! Hope you get on the next one, on your own pace soon!

STUPENDOUS! SO ON EDGE FOR MORE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!