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The Doctor Rose chapter 8 . 8/10/2019 awesome |
Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 8 . 8/9/2019 More please |
Dreamcatcher56 chapter 8 . 8/9/2019 Agree with Rory, Amy is indeed jealous and she need not be since they both have different roles and relationships with their Doctor. ..another wonderful update. |
LadyHopeofGallifrey chapter 8 . 8/9/2019 Brilliant chapter! Loved it! :) |
The Doctor Rose chapter 7 . 7/1/2019 YAY! |
greeneyesCutie chapter 2 . 11/3/2018 Nice chapter. |
greeneyesCutie chapter 1 . 11/3/2018 I like this beginning |
The Doctor Rose chapter 6 . 9/24/2018 LOVING IT! |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/18/2018 Loved the 3rd POV over the 1st POV. However, give Rose more of a presence. Most, if not all, has seen the episode. Rose being here is what makes it different, pull that out more. Give her more lines, make her more present. I'm interested in your story, not reading a novelization of the episode's script. And that can be avoided by bring Rose more into the story. Get into her mind more. Is she jealous of the Doctor flirting with River? How did she feel about the Doctor's somewhat cold words to River about trusting her? Give readers more insight with Rose. I loved the part where the Doctor introduced Rose to Canton and Nixon! I'll be waiting for the next chapter eagerly! |
padfootl0ve chapter 6 . 9/17/2018 This was fantastic. I can't wait go read more |
Radiant Arabian Nights chapter 6 . 9/16/2018 More please |
The Doctor Rose chapter 5 . 2/12/2018 hope to see more |
The Doctor Rose chapter 1 . 2/12/2018 good start |
Bleh001 chapter 1 . 9/17/2017 I love this! |
Halfblood With A SIG And A Pen chapter 5 . 7/6/2017 This is great! |