Like this

Woah such a tense atmosphere

The batkids deserve better than Bruce; they deserve a father that *won’t* put his mission ahead of his family,

Trad? I can do it (I'm french)

great difference

I love this. I love it so much I'm honestly about to start crying. OMG plz write more

I am 100% in love with this series! I adore the way you portray the relationship between Dick and Jason! Your writing had me hooked from the opening of Part I (sorry I haven't reviewed the other three; I was too excited to find out where the story would go next). I feel like Dick's trauma is portrayed convincingly, I was surprised by his decision to take a break from Nightwing but I could definitely see the buildup to it from his inability to concentrate on patrol in Part II and him freezing up during the fire in Part III as well as his overall inner turmoil.
I'd also like to say that I really dig your writing style as well; it's what I like to call 'gently descriptive' and there's probably a much neater term for it out there, but by this I just mean that your descriptions really set the scene, really draw a vivid picture for the reader without flooding the reader with information. Basically I mean it's not overly wordy and pretentious.
TL;DR: great story, thanks for sharing!

Can do the traduction in french of this fiction? I dont really speek english and my friends to. Please let me do the traduction in french.
Ansawer me quiq
P-S: I really like what you do and I can do the traduction of your french: je kiff l'univers Marvel et DC Comics

Awesome!

Hola
Excelente continuación de la historia.
Dejas entrever más allá que angustia y consuelo... estableces el tiempo y como afecta a los miembros de la familia Murciélago.
Las reacciones de los chicos, perfectas y en sincronía con la historia. Da un poco de pena lo de Alfred, pero eso lo vuelve más realista... y, también lo de Bruce.
Gran trabajo.
Me encantó.

Salut je ne parle pas couramment anglais et je me demande si tu peux traduire ce tecte en français merci