If Sally had just said that he was with family on the west coast without the we knew then it might have been more believable as that was the truth

I think this story is more of a Percy Jackson crossover with agents of shield, not the avengers I think you should move it to that section

Continua com essa história por favor
Muito bom esperando por mais...

Even though it has been 5 months I still can't believe that you would pick Arrow over the Avengers and Percy Jackson SMH. Such a shame too. :(

I’ve read over half of this story and can’t get over what a little bitch you made Percy become.

How come all the Percy Jackson crossovers always start with him getting captured by cannon fodder (shield agents)?

I was enjoying the story so much that I forgot you were revising it and got sad when I read your message. Hope you come back to it soon.

I love this story, I also think you were right to put it on hold to revise it. I can't wait to see how you change it but please take your time and make sure you're happy with it.

annabeth you know damn good and well if percy had died and you lived then he wouldnt have moved on and i bet its luke

im not trying to be a dick but percy wouldnt be as weak and pathetic as youve made him seriously shield isnt that strong you overpowered them and nerfed percy

pretty sure poseidon is also father of horses, god of destruction, floods, and droughts, as well as creator of the doors of death in tartarus, at least in some myths lol

yes its unfair despite zeus and hades visiting their kids several times while they were growing up he went way to quick and easy. also i think his birth year is like 92 or 93 not 96?

Cool story! Side note though, it should be categorized under Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. and Percy-Jackson and the Olympians. It really has no involvement with the Avengers. You’re a good author though, and a lot of people will love you’re story

well, take as long time as you need
It's okay

Love the story and can not wait for the revision chapters.

I like the Pairing even if I personally think he would be a better match with Sky, glad she found her real name but it will always be sky for me, even if the Scarlet witch and Vision is a pairing in the comics and such I never trusted Vision because he made of Ultron which I do not trust, the mind stone and that's a given not to trust, and JARVIS which is programed by Stark and would not go against Stark no mater what and I do not trust Stark as he is is a rich kid that just about gets what he wants and if he does not then he will throw his kind of fit then ether buy it to keep it for him self or destroy it to keep it from other, or expose it out of pettiness. Lest not even get in to where he basically blackmails a 16 year old Peter Parker in to fighting with him in Germany against other Avengers. But the deal with Spider-man is another deal for another time.

I do think Percy got picked up by SHIELD to early on after leaving Olympias and His training went a little to fast.

Why did you pick him to be 18 , I do not recall any indication of what year he was born, granted it has been a long time since I read a Percy Jackson book so I just can not remember.