This was an outstanding FanFiction. I am pleased with the ending and would be delighted if there was a sequel. If you are up to it, I can correct grammar for you... if you want.

this chapter does not contain a lemon it contains a lime see the difference T.T

Thanks for this! Really enjoyed it, and did I just read a possible sequel tease? :) Anyways, thanks for giving the story such a wonderful ending! It meant a lot to me, because I've been reading this story for a while now, and it's made so many good memories.

Thank you for the story. Don't ever delete it. I love this story. Please make the sequel as soon as you can. Please make a happy ending for it. Don't let anything happen to alex, blue, their hatchlings or the others please

Godzilla?

cant wait for the sequel...

Oh man, that was so good.

I've been reading this for a while now, and it was such a good read. You did a really nice job on it, but I'm now sad it's come to an end. Although, is making a sequel possible? I just enjoy reading it so much! :)

Excellent!

Thank you for the story. Don't ever delete it. I love this story. Please make the sequel as soon as you can. Please make a happy ending for it. Make alex mate with blue and have hatchlings please

Thank you for the story. I loved every bit of it.

My only request is maybe an epilogue chapter of the characters maybe 5 years in the future or something

Great chapter. Happy holidays

Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!

Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

god reading the weapon descriptions made me cringe so hard... AR-15A2? think you mean M16A2 and why the hell would a highly funded private military company use a naval equivalent of the PKM that fires bullets that were designed in the late 1800's when the FN MAG and its American variant the M240 series is considered the basic standard ad is better in every conceivable way for the same price...

now i cant see the ACU as intimidating i just see them as using equipment that is rusty and 70 years out of date...