Why was the end of this chapter so rushed? I feel like you were in a rush and couldn’t write a “proper” finish

Oh my...

The Grimm that ate Melody~

Jaw meet floor...

Wow at least it's not just pure smut, makes it less likely for me to drop it.

OC? Yep I like my OC stories and wouldn't mind reading one by yah.

IJ

Anonymous tip?... Cardin.

cute ending 3

one of the best neo x … fics I've had the pleasure of reading. A lot of people don't know how to balance neo's character. So she'd either turn out into some giant sociopath or mushy magical girl that somehow managed to shed her past within a second of meeting male lead. It is the art of bending a character enough to a believable degree that makes a romance all the more better.

I will be able to get past these last 2 chapters but fuck this was so forced

Thos seems so forced with how the current jaune was built up

This chapter was wholesome.

Ominous ending! Good start so far I’m really excited for where this story goes

I have to ask, since Neopolitan is technically one of the villains in RWBY canon, you're not gonna have her corrupt Jaune are you? She's not gonna seduce him into villainy or anything, right?
It's just... that last line of "he was going to break each and every promise he made" I mean that just sounds... wrong and chilling.

I really wanted to like this story but when you decided to mention prostitution and sleeping around for fun I just... no thats kinda disgusting and sick.

I want a sequel!