good story, hope for more!

Nice move, paranoid and realistic.
The boy is growing, he knows he has limits and he wants to be useful.

Sweet and naive Subaru.
It will be so sad when reality hit him.

EMIYA and Subaru are equally marked.
They carry blame that they should not and despite knowing that it is an uphill fight they continue to fight.

Damn dude, this is pretty amazing so far. Really hope you decide to pick the story back up.

Cerita yg sangat bagus

Wait why can't Subaru see the arms? I thought that was part of his authority from the satella

Is this dropped

Great story! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D

this chapter was awesome

'That's strange... I don't remember that at all...'
What? How do you not remember it if you are remembering it? What?

what happened? I WANT MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRR

Subaru went full Sword Saint on them, if that doesn't make Ram's opinion of him skyrocket nothing will.

Give him UBW and he won't have to die for about half of the light novel. Really Shirou's powers are so damn OP, even a tenth of that power will help Subaru greatly.

Wonderful story I really like how instead of following the simple cut and paste protagonist route you chose to do something a little different. Anyway great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.