I really enjoyed this story even if it is a single chapter, the idea of Chrom losing faith in the world and joining robin/grima is a interesting idea, its unfortunate and saddening that we will not get to see the reaction of their former comrades and realize that it was their actions that caused this, especially Lucina's when she finds out that her father is now her enemy.
I hope if you see this that you might one day feel the urge to do some more chapters on it or put it for for adoption for some one else to do but even if you don't thank you for this interesting little number it was worth reading even if it is short.

Question where is Grima? I don't understand that... I wonder how Lucina will react to this ; )

I know it's complete, but I'd like to see both Lucina's reactions. The younger one's cuddling and the elder's shock that her father is still alive.

This story looks like it could be really good :) it's a little confusing in places but on the whole it seems like an interesting concept.

Can't wait for more ;)