this should be a new chapter for LoC

Congratulations on finishing this story! I do think you should write a sequel, and it would be cool for Reagle to play a role in it.

I hope there is a sequel.. with Razar

This is a good idea for a story, and I'm interested to see who the figure who first used persuader plants on Crooler is. I personally see her more as misunderstood than pure evil.
My suggestion to you is to try and fix some of the grammar errors. There are a lot of run-on sentences that make it difficult to read, and whenever you use "I" it should be capitalized.
Regardless, I'm excited to see how this turns out!

I wonder what will Razar do?