to complex unneeded plot

And here it is the super duper complex nonsense plot that is fucking stupid that brings down the quality of the story

Oh god I hope it is not one of those stories where our mc is part of some massive plot cause some random nonsense or he was once a super power gamer who lost his memories just keep it simple as a gamer doing quest in did without a bunch of other people interfering to much cause some super nonsense plot

Why human... he can’t even choose sacred gear it’s a dlc

this is horrible

You now, fuck yourself, dropped

nice.

"not any strong feelings against RAPE"? I very much hope this doesnt reflect your own opinion? But I also dont understand why you would put something like that if it didnt, as the only thing it lends to fleshing out his character is making him a douchey Mr. Nice Guy.

Again... this hacker is apparently only slightly higher level than Douglas, yet is capable of enslaving a clone of the Leviathan, break into a boss instance, etc etc.

Just report the whole thing to the Game Admin / GMs... this doesn’t feel at all like something Douglas should have to deal with, especially 2.5 years ahead of dxd canon.

Kinda lame, because the intro sounded like the first world would be “easy” and yet you apparently have some third party running around that can break the rules of the game, screw with him as he’s questing, and then not get called out on it.

So these are hackers? Why haven’t they been banned?

Yeah I've read this but question why do other gamers bother him in HIS world when they got their own to fuck off in kinda stupid for a lvl billion plus to fuck with a lvl zero noob

Chep Chep Chep Chep

The story is entertaining, too bad I needed 14 chapter to discover that you are re-writing and that the re-write is still not at 1/3 words compared to this story so I will need to wait

Yay! Rewrites!

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