I would like to see more it just didn't have that fanfiction vibe like THIS: "Soma what are you doing here"

It's good but annoying to read because if some POV. Third person would be much better.

Just is just copy/paste with a tiny bit of difference. Nothing unique so far.

It feels like a good fiction. But random italicized words and missing commas and punctuation makes it a frustrating read. You have excellent content. But it needs proper structure. Try getting a beta.

Again, I wonder about the purpose of the italicized words. They are used wrongly.

I couldnt finish a chapter because of how bad the grammar is. It's a fantastic concept though. Needs to be rewritten.

I can't grasp the reason for all the italicized words or the missing punctuation. It's making this really hard to read.

i love it

One characteristics of Soma is that he don't get depressed whatever the situation, he push on. That's what saiba and erina's grandfather see as Soma's potential.

What's up with the italics? They're almost never necessary where you've used them. I keep reading them with emphasis and it interferes with the flow of the sentence.

Senpai is spelled with an 'N'. Plz don't be one of those authors.

Had potential; idea is interesting. But have tons of things to fix (namely how the story is written; grammar, etc.)
Just ignore this if you don't like this review.

This style of writing is kind of hard to read and understand. Writing words from the screen gives a terrible result. And you simply use the word "I" too much. With first person, you have to delve into the character themselves and put yourself into their position. Which you haven't done. All you did was write the story from the anime and introducing a new aspect which brought no change, to either the supernatural world or the natural world.

Thank you for summarizing each episode of Shokugeki no Soma and pasting them into these convenient chapters. Really helpful to those of us that just don't have the time to watch the show and would rather get the relevant information in 5 minutes without all that pesky time wasting stuff like good content.
Because of the blatant 'similarities', I couldn't help compare this story to the manga and anime, so every significant change you made to justify this as 'fanfiction' stood out and overall made the story seem even worse than it already was. You gave no justification for why certain characters acted in certain ways. You just wrote 'line from manga, line from manga, glaring change from the story, line from manga, line from manga'.
Honestly, I saw the comments praising you for this garbage and it made me upset. You deserve to be told the truth. This story is only good because it copies the exact lines of a manga/anime that has already been proven to be good.

Wow this is good. I really want to find out about Soma's mom and his persinallity is cool. (I like it when the 'Hero' turns insane, sad, or emoitionless... -_-) Can't wait for the sequel! I am typing this before I even checked your profile if it has the sequel so I am talking out of my butt right now. So if it is out I will definatley read it! Maybe you'll see me there.

Unmarried women are called Miss not Mrs as that's what a married woman is called, also once again to much detail, though the concept of the eye thing is good