| Reviews for Three Years Since |
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  green turtle chapter 23 . 5/4 cant wait for the next chapter! this is awesome! i like how you wrote the alchemy spells in latin (most of the time) and let your readers translate them! some were funny like the shield spell (big shrimp!) wish other fanfic writers did this. |
 MarvelGeeeek chapter 18 . 4/13 Omg I love this |
| AstoriaPheonix chapter 3 . 4/13 oh, the film theory thing that with the memory being restored, bill was too. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/13 This is a really good fic. Loving it so far! |
| Ano-kata05 chapter 21 . 10/27/2019 We'll wait for your updates |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2019 *Possitive feedback* |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/26/2019 reading this |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2019 yeyyy |
| 99griffon chapter 18 . 12/25/2016 In my opinion, the fighting scenery dragged along too much and the ending lost all emotional value due to the ending being given to the reader in the beginning of the story. Between that chapter and this one, the plot felt like a story about the changing of fates and would have probably ended up better if it went though with that. That was a missed opportunity. The diction and such pushed that factor even more and it was just a pain to read the ending in all honesty. Furthermore, there was little to no development in the characters during this story and it would have had a bigger emotional impact throughout if there was. I saw a ton of potential in this story, but it wasn't brought up to the level of that raw potential. |
| Situation71 chapter 17 . 11/25/2016 Not bad at all (I like those directors cut notes) :D keep up the good work! You're a very talented writer. |
| craftyminer188 chapter 4 . 10/20/2016 much review such like wow thank you |
| 618cipher chapter 15 . 10/11/2016 NONONONONONONONONONONOOOOooooooooOOOOoo! This is too good! I cant handle this! You had me from the very first chapter! I found your fic this morning before school and I could not stop reading! I made it to chapter 9, but then I had school, I just finished the rest and I'm SERIOUSLY saying that this is probably the BEST fanfic I've ever read!(And also you are a good egg not reavling his birth name(although I do already know it)) Also I'm SO glad that you have good grammar and spelling because I've read so many fanfics with really good story plots but I can't understand a single thing! Anyway, you are an amazing writer, hope you update as soon as you can! Byee! :3 |
| 99griffon chapter 15 . 10/10/2016 Read it in class...good choices |
| daddy chapter 1 . 10/10/2016 this sucks |
| Houstonmoose911 chapter 3 . 10/8/2016 This looks like art in the making! Can't wait to see more. Imma read the rest now |
