This is the greatest story of all time... please make more like this one.

Ok this is as far as I can keep reading. Interesting story truly. Ok so parts become unbelievable so much so it kills the story. Too many have the legendary Sage of the six paths eyes. Those eyes should be VERY RARE like 1 in 1000 chance of having at best. When that many have them it kills the story. Hokage was willing to give Water 2 legend jutsus WHY?! He should have taught those to his own ninja first or at least his top ninja to boost the villages power. Why give those to another village? Makes ZERO sense. Maybe a couple of the 2nd Hokage water Justus but not those 2. The whole dragon summon contract was a big No. There are tons more errors in this story. Good luck.

Your story gets so confusing with all the flashbacks and throws almost all canon in the trash. Needs work.

An amazing story. Hope to read more of your work. Simply outstanding.

Man i hope you spare shisui. Clearly in konoha hes the one who not hate naruto.

What about the uzumaki shrine by konoha

You need to get back to writing old friend. I miss your work!

Oh fuck no. I can feel Hinata cringe coming and I dearly hope it does not happen after all.
And you're making everything too straightforward imo. Despite the amazing inventions and epic imagination. But I'm reading it for the crack and gratuitous torture so you good.

Lmao. I adore your portrayal of the Ame Trio.
And then there's Deidara... XDDDD

Oooook. Jiraiya wasn't there for Naruto because he was busy with his spy network in canon, so Minato's teacher and Naruto's godfather is the man who almost killed Naruto several times, hated Minato, and experimented on humans in canon. Lol wtf is that logic.

Meh. I like the story so far so whatever. Even if it is more of a wish fulfillment than plot. Still done way better than many.

nice story

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Tobi is the goodest boy

Tobi is a very good boy

sexayyyyyyyy

Mio has Scorch Release not Blaze Release