Wow! Loved this story, it had me on the edge of my seat! I love your take on both the 'Hermione Has a brother' and 'Hermione is a Dagwoth-Granger' concepts/topics/ideas! Thank you for being so creative and coming up with something amazing! I hope you update again!
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Please update again soon!

Thank you for sticking with your story. It is fresh and interesting. You have a fan and firm reader.

You started out with a boy enraged by rape and killing of unknown, adult women, gave him animalistic instincts and bursts of uncontrollable emotion, and yet let him allow similar torture of minors without giving a damn..
I think you got lost in the darkness and failed to see the character you built in previous chapters.

I may be wrong, but it doesn't feel like it right now...

I am enjoying your story, there are alot of grammatical errors or omissions in it though. I know you said that this is about Hermione and William's family however, I would like to see a definite change to Harry, one that makes him a little more like the Dagworths. And where he and Hermione drop Ron and become closer to Neville, and a significant change happens to Neville too. I mean at the moment their growth seems to be hindered by the older generation who think that they know what is best but they are really only doing more damage. I think that while Augusta is not as bad as Dumbledore, she is not being as helpful to her grandson and grand-godson as she could be. Particularly with Draco already being Lord Malfoy.

omg this is really good i'm like in the edge of my seat. plsssssssss update soon

Well this is an awesome story! I like that for all the OC is great and powerful, Harry isn't a little bitch, which is a problem in this type of story. Fantastic world building, keep up the amazing work!

Wow, you're still alive! Great chapter, I've always loved it when Hermione does some awesome magic.

love it keep it up.

Great idea, that someone figured out that the room of requirement could open a way to the chamber of secrets.

This was a great chapter,
Please keep up the awesome work.

Long time reader, just noticed that this story only has 130 reviews which is a crime. The writing is fantastic (except for a few typographical errors) everything fits together plotwise, and the twists that happen in the story are genuinely surprising. You have managed to weave in an OC that fits naturally into the world and that is fantastic. He really does seem like a reflection of what Tom might have been like in his younger years. However you might have developed his strength too much top quickly. If his growth continues at this rate throughout the whole story (if it last all 7 years) he could just snap his fingers to finish off lord voldermort.

A very enjoyable story to read. Looking forward to seeing more Hermione learning the family magic

Asthetic

McGonagall's animal form is male? (That is the meaning of "tom cat".)

Oh my god! You're alive! Too bad i can't relate to the story anymore. Good chapter, a little bare but definitely relayed what you wanted to show.