| Reviews for The Journey of the Betrayal Master |
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   Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 5 . 8/24/2019 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. I can think of 2 special pokemon from the Orange League that aren't legendaries that Ash could possibly catch: the talking Slowking & the Crystal Onix. |
| Poke-ranger21 chapter 1 . 12/1/2018 please update soon |
| thunderofdeath97 chapter 5 . 11/24/2018 maybe work on the grammar a bit, im guessing the crystal onix, and do the trainers not understand the breeding process and egg groups ? i mean its kinda obvious how ralts can know shadow claw |
| Potterlord9999 chapter 2 . 4/26/2018 I'm sorry, I can barely understand what you're writing, I suggest you get a beta if you don't have one, this has promise, but there are a lot of errors in spelling or grammar that need fixing. I'm not trying to flame, just trying to help you. |
| The Black Latios chapter 5 . 12/18/2017 update soon |
| I love reading123453 chapter 5 . 12/16/2017 can't wait for the next chapter |
| Ty Batto chapter 5 . 11/6/2017 please update soon |
| ng jun cheng chapter 5 . 10/30/2017 How about Manaphy who joins Ash in the next chapter with Ash as His father and Serena as His new mother |
| fallondyson chapter 5 . 8/11/2017 PLEASE UPDATE ON THIS STORY SOON PLEASE |
| lulubram chapter 5 . 8/3/2017 More please ! |
| ncread chapter 5 . 7/26/2017 nice but try to and more descriptive words please that way you can make your sentances more complete other than that i like this. |
| Phantomsoul2015 chapter 5 . 7/23/2017 Noooooooooo why did you have have a connisueir join them |
| CorruptHero chapter 5 . 7/23/2017 Does OL mean original legendaries or something? And will Dawn and May be in the contest as well if so that will be hilarious |
| CorruptHero chapter 4 . 5/20/2017 Interesting story but if it's not dead yet you should fix how you spelled Haunter |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/22/2017 great chapter and battle |
