Brilliant!~~~

nice. this is very nioce. .w.

I really like the idea of the story!
Hope to see more soon! :3

Okay, so, first of all, don't listen to that Guest who thinks this story has a plot hole. Why? Because even demons have weaknesses, and I think the Pandora demon, while being weak to earth (as I understand), would potentially be strong against Time and Space. Annihilation magic? No, well I tried x)

From my point of view, even thought Mephisto is acting a tiny bit ooc (the tail, argh), the story stands, and I'm very interested! I'm eager to read the next chapter :D

Hello, friend! I hope you are having a beautiful day. By the way, I am loving this story! It's gorgeous, and please, feel free to ignore that one guest who speaks of plot holes. It's a fanfiction, and people have written some pretty weird things, and some pretty rotten OOC things. In comparison to the lesser ones I've read, yours is a masterpiece.

It doesn't shock me that Mephisto has a weakness (is it really? It's a classic underestimated-person-weaker-than-King-creates-something-so-strong-that-no-one-can-stop-it story.) I absolutely adore these types, and I figure it only makes sense that only her King knows how to seal her. A pathetic person has the key to keeping her away. It's brilliant. Also, Pandora. Goddess of Chaos, while in some odd sense, Mephisto plans his things carefully. What an excellent contrast!

I hope you have a lovely day.
Stay savvy, my friend.
~Hails

Very hard to believe that a demon as powerful as Mephisto, who controls Time and Space, would be afraid of some lesser demon after his soul... Hell, I think he'd be more afraid if it were Michael the Archangel after him instead.

You see, what you have here is a plot hole. You got a demon who controls time and space which makes him near invincible to beat. Unless you are Lucifer, Satan, or on that ranking. And yet, a one of his younger brothers (which is it, Iblis? Azazel? Beelzebub? Amaimon, Astaroth, Egyn?) was able to contain this supposedly "fearful" demon.

*Sigh*. I hope you have a better reasoning behind this than what you have given. This just seems ridiculous at this point.

Um.. You are aware that Mephisto Pheles is the Demon King of Time and Space. Third most powerful in Gehenna, second born son of Satan. Satan who is the God of All demons. Judging by the writing, you do. So you know how fucking silly it is to have some would be demon challenge him. The guy who could just erase her from existence if he so wished to.

I honestly don't think you thought this story through because you have quite the glaring plot hole here... Fix it please.