hmm, this seems very good. I really like the progression, not to mention it is very steamy. and the masochist soul is a very nice touch.

gold. fucken gold. How come with fifty shades of grey it's nasty, cheesy and pointless (in my opinion) but with soul and maka it's fucken gold! POWER OF THE OTP! fucken love this!

There are a lot of great lines and moments in here, but Soul's "'I'll give you a hundred,' he muttered, somehow annoyed that she can be this cute" and "red like a litmus strip for their combined inability to keep cool" are my stand-out favorites. It just captures their adoring, cantankerous relationship so well. I love the emphasis on trust and consent in this story, too.

Well written. I liked Soul being in control, albeit reluctantly. These two, his hand cramp was glorious. The fact that he wonders if he was actually hearing her brush her teeth, hilarious. Nicely done!

This was really something else.. when i thought it couldn't get any better you write this! it was amazing! and please write a story where soul gets tied up by maka...

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THIS IS SO GOOD THOUGH and i really enjoy the explicit consent and the conversation they have about it in-fic. also this is really good and maka is really feeling it (tm) and i enjoy all of this. and yes, pls tie soul up, too.