Reviews for Naruto: Rise of the West
Zerofulliabuster chapter 20 . 8/23
Shinka is evolution or changes

E.g.

Patamon shinka... Angemon

So rewrite this story
Guest chapter 19 . 8/22
Danzo says "just because the brat wasn't given to him when he was born", but you know there was a much, MUCH easier way of konoha being the most powerful.. Just give naruto everything he should have had from birth, since birth... A lot less scheming, a TON less convuluted plans (that were pretty stupid anyway. They were not so much plans as just idiotic ways of doing stuff and then "hoping" things worked the way the village wanted... That's NOT "planning" that's "wishing"),a lot less DRASTIC changes to the leaf (which strain believably), a lot more "unification" by the the assembled jounin and they would have built a NATION or EMPIRE on the boy's back and he'd have helped do it with a village would have been EASILY the strongest... (not to mention the most "well-connected" of all of them)... It really would have taken a lot LESS work!

Really all of it (the civilian council, naruto's problems... Even danzo's delusions, the divisions of the clans, even the animosity of the villages toward each other).. Have several solutions that aren't that complicated or involved.. These are all, really "cutting the Gordian knot" problems.
Darth Renatus chapter 10 . 7/24
Team Four Star! "Sound of a neck snapping and Krillin gurgling is heard" Amazing.
Smartyul chapter 20 . 6/23
End Game is the biggest crossover in history
azndrgn: Hold my pen
LoveShipper134 chapter 15 . 6/5
So far on, I'm blessed... This book has so many crossovers! And I'm loving it!
Vanitas Caelum chapter 19 . 6/4
despite on how fun you make this story unravel, danzo and his irk does remind me of how some real world cult member would act and react to stuff... pretty deep for such a fun filled fanfic where tifa is sadly still waiting for cloud to make a move and madara is siccing meteor on sephi! no offense by that, i enjoyed it thoroughly (I'm an FF die hard)
Vanitas Caelum chapter 18 . 6/4
i cant stop commenting. that last part was so cool. gold, gold!
Vanitas Caelum chapter 17 . 6/4
who dares call a meteor on sephi hahahahaha jesus gold again!
Vanitas Caelum chapter 15 . 6/4
i was gonna edit my last comment and put "why not make kairi an uzumaki" and boom, another gold. really loving this, event though you might not read any, i hope the feelings of elation and giddiness can pass through!
Vanitas Caelum chapter 13 . 6/4
the moment that shank show up is gold. i dont care how old this fic is by 2020, its GOLD!
justin game 44 chapter 4 . 6/2
Hey, this will probably sound wierd..but I try to help other writers, who might feel sad and have a bad day. Since I don't really know who could be sad I just select a random person.
So idk if you need seeing this (or if it helps) but I wish you a wonderful day and keep doing what you are proud of! :)
AlolanGallade chapter 2 . 5/17
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gabelou1991 chapter 3 . 5/4
J'adore kenichi j'adore apres j'espère que naruto est au moins du niveau jonin .
gabelou1991 chapter 2 . 5/4
J'aime beaucoup et il y a fort et fort pour être empereur il doit être au moins parmi les 5 plus fort juste pour avoir les vrai pourvoir.
Parchonas chapter 20 . 4/12
This is an absolutely amazing Story in my opinion
I don't really have much to say other than I thouroughly enjoyed every part of it. The great pacing, character development and the solid ending really set this apart from other fanfictions I've read recently. Thanks for the great read.
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