I love this story. I really hope you will be posting a sequel. I am dying to know what happens next!

I seem to start all my reviews for ur stories with ‘awww’! Loved this but like I said previously, I love all ur stories. I just want more of them.

Adorei essa favor continue.

vai fazer a continuação?

Mostly pretty good work. I like the idea of Emily revisiting different important moments of hers and Hotch's past, but I think it was in poor taste to shed Hayley in such a negative light. She was an important and very special part of Hotch's life, and I don't think its right to discredit her character. She was a great mother, and a wife who really cared for her husband, and merely wished he'd be there for his family. Don't get me wrong, I like the Hotch/Prentiss ship, but I don't know if I could really justify it with that bitter taste of sort of Hating on Hayley in my mouth. Perhaps it would have been a bit more meaningful for Hayley to visit Emily and for them to talk about Hotch, and perhaps have Hayley even give Emily and Hotch her blessing, knowing that Emily could be really good for him, and that its time for Hotch to move on.

I found Emily's lack of confidence in her relationship with Hotch to be somewhat out of character. I definitely understand the perspective that she wouldn't think her superior to be interested, but her comments or contemplations on it seemed almost helpless and self pitying. More of an 'I'm not good enough for him' than an 'it wouldn't work out because he's my superior and we're both too professional to break those boundaries'. The later seems a bit more realistic of a scenario for her as a fully grown, confident fbi agent.

I found Hotch to be slightly out of character as well - he's always seemed to be more of the silent grieving type. I'm aware that he's quite certainly not above crying, but I wasn't so sure I could get behind his pleas to an unconscious Emily. He seems like the type who would remain steadfast in his support for her, especially if he loved her, and maybe utter a few words to her, but I found his lines to be a bit cliche.

This is a really good story. Short and sweet, and an interesting take on Hotch and Prentiss's relationship. If I didn't think it was good, I wouldn't have left a review. You've got a lot of potential as a writer. Maybe just do a little bit more of an in depth look at the characters, and try to think outside the box in terms of reactions and interactions so that they don't seem as cliche. Keep up the good work, and I hope you continue writing!

Great how you show a man being tender without looking like a shmuck.

Wow. I can't believe you left it like that! Amazing chapter!

I couldn't recover when I read the end of We Had It All. I loved it to be honest but I would like that plot with Emily not having the miscarriage. It would be amazing and I think you can write it just pretty well!

I can't believe you leave it on cliffhanger but it was so good! Can't wait to read the sequel and read what you have in store!

Love. Love. Love. Can't wait for the sequel. Hurry please!

Great chapter! I enjoyed it! I look forward to reading the sequel!

I was heartbroken reading this story. So anxious to know what will happen at the end... Held my breath for 5 chapters!
SO SAD!
At least she woke up.

Yes please! I would love a sequel, although i dont know what kind of storyline would follow this. Lol but thats why i am the reader. :P but i love all your stories anyways, im sure ill love the next ones. :)

Can't wait to read more. Update soon! I love this...

Omg please please please update this soon this chapter has just left me wanting so much more!