YAAAAASSS ZUKO MADE HER THE QUEEEEEENNNN

This is the best Rhaegar and Lyanna fix I've probably ever read and it's technically not even about them! Nice job!

WTFFFF IM SO HAPPY BUT OMG HE PICKED HER AHHHHHGGGGHDXKSODIDUDIKXPQKEHRUFJ

This was extremely poetic, a fitting end!

That scene with Katara and Sokka almost had me in tears!

This story is honestyl shit boring.

Is Zuko really dead? Please don't let Zuko be really dead! Love this story...

Great story! Read in one sitting and really enjoyed the beginning with the gladiator theme. Although the depth and originality of the characters became a bit too fast paced after the gladiator fiasco, you have been able to slow it back down with these later chapters. Overall great story, you've inspired me to continue mine. Can't wait for what happens next best of luck!

Whooo boy! I found this story and read it straight through - and WOW has it been intense. You do a great job of pulling the reader into your story, and even though this is fanfiction and the reader is generally already invested in the characters, you manage to KEEP them invested. I really like how you've adapted the story from Game of Thrones to the Avatar-verse, and you've done it quite well, I think.
Keep up that good work - this has definitely got my follow!
- foolofatook :)

Aagh! You did it, you actually did it! Baaaah! Zukooooo!
Still a good story but I was just wishing for a happily ever after. Please write a fluffy story after this. Lol.

Parlay! Parlay!let the leaders speak first and parlay, if nothing comes of it the draw swords. Kuzon's mission: assassinate Ozai! Parlay!

I have a feeling how I know this is going to end but I still hope even with the small changes that their fates don't end in complete tragedy here's hoping they can escape and live in peace besides i kinda doubt Zuko would die on the battlefield against jet

Dear loveanddestiny527,
I really enjoyed reading your story. To change the avatarworld so that it reminds of Westeros, was a really good idea.
I preferred the beginning of your story, though. I get that you want Zuko and Katara to have the same fate as Rhaegar and Lyanna, but I think in order to do that you changed Zuko and Katara's characters a bit too much. Because they would never just keep hiding if they knew that there was a war going on because of them. Zuko and Katara are both not that selfish and would rather do what is good for the world. And Katara would never let Zuko go to fight her people in a war in which he is clearly outnumbered.
Yeah, those things are kind of frustrating me while reading your story.
And I've been wandering if there is no Avatar in this avatarworld, because I think that he would be the only way to end this war peacefully and I really want to read a happy ending. Kind of like Zuko and Katara leave their hiding place to meet with Sokka alone and explain everything. He understands, but they still want to go against the Firelord, which is understood by Zuko. Because his people love him so much, he cannot just side with Sokka, but Katara can be kept at a safe place because if the baby, Zuko pretends to be on his father's side, but is really just defending his people and it is Sokka's and Zuko's plan to let the avatar kill the Firelord. So that will happen, Zuko surrenders, Sokka demands that Katara will be released and that Zuko should be punished for his crimes against Katara. Both will pretend to be confused, because it's part of the plan that they don't know what the people said about Zuko. So, they reveal what has really been going on and that Katara is now a water bending master thanks to Zuko and that they are married and expecting a child and that Katara did want everything about that. Sokka will accept that and Zuko will be Firelord and Jet... well, Jet can go back to his brothels or something. Zuko could also free the world from Fire Nation influence together with the avatar's help. Well, that would be the happy ending.
I don't mean to offend you or something by writing how I think your story should continue. I just really really hope for the sake of the main characters that you are not going to mirror the end from Rhaegar's nd Lyanna's story. Plus, I can't see Suki behave all hateful against the "bastard" that Sokka would be bringing home.
I simply got the impression that the avatar characters are too much changed only so that they fit into Rhaegar's and Lyanna's story. Especially Iroh. He would never ever tell Zuko to just obey his father, even if it is for the sake of the Fire Nation. What about: "you have the power to bring balance back to the world. What your ancestors did, can only be righted by you. It is your legacy etc."?
I just prefer the avatar characters and end to Rhaegar's and Lyanna's story.
I'm sorry that I'm moaning here about the way your story goes since you made it pretty clear in the summary, but I just had to write my thoughts down.
No matter how your story will go on, I'm still going to read your next chapters (hoping for a happy ending). So, enjoy writing and please update soon.
Also, I'm sorry for every grammar or spelling mistake in this review, English is not my native language, so... yeah.
That review is kind of getting long. I'll just stop here.
Thank you for writing and sharing your story with all the avatar fans out there, that's really cool and I'm looking forward to reading a new chapter of your story:)
Good luck with your writing! (Thump's up emoji)

Very well written blend of asoiaf and atla, keep up the good work! Like others have pointed out I hope you aren't exactly copying Lyanna and Rhaegars story because I think we have all read more than enough Zutara tragedies and the way you have the story set up now you can easily pivot or keep following the asoiaf Canon. I know it's kinda childish to want a happily ever after ending, but it would break my heart to see the battle of the trident play out like it does in asoiaf. Please don't kill off our OTP.

Thank you! This is exciting and suspenseful. Cant wait to read about what happens next!