Good job author-san , it is impressive that u can update these long chapters in two days

I've enjoyed this story very much so far; not many SIOC sister fics of Luffy has this much work and quality put into it.

I look forward to reading more from your next update.

Do you have a DeviantArt Page?

I wanna see what Lily looks like.

HELLO YES I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! This is probably my fifth or sixth time rereading this (I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed until now, I really should have but I just recently got into the habit (not that that makes it any better)) ANYWAYS and I love it just as much every single time I reread it! I love how you've characterized Lily, she's such a badass and I love the changes she's made in the timeline, and I'm really really excited to see what will happen with Alabasta and everything else involving Ace (especially since if he does get captured, there's no way in hell Lily and Sabo will be able to stay away)! I love how Ace is written, he's one of my favorite characters and I love how doting he is yet you can still see the sibling squabbles and mischief lmao and I also am in love with how Lily interacted with Shanks and the Straw Hats too! Her relationship with Zoro is so funny and cute, and I love how she's so in tune with all of Nami's emotions and comforts her so well! I love how she really gets Usopp and I'm excited to see how she's gonna deal with his insecurities along with the Merry situation, and I love how she keeps Sanji in check while also recognizing how kind he is as well! This story is so so so good and I love it so much! Thank you so much for sharing this with us! Also, as much as I say "I can't wait", I really can, please take your time with updating and come back when you're ready, because we'll all still be here whenever you're ready! Thanks again for this amazing story!

binge-read this in a week thank you for writing it!

this could be a mythical zoan fruit for lily as it also covers healing as well

wiki/Caladrius

I like your story, and was wondering if you are going to continue this story?

I love it! Man I know that this is probably Discontinued but I'm that it will update some how

Wow! This is really great. I love it! If I could think of words to type, then I would give you a full paragraph explaining how great this is. But, since my brain isn’t working, I’ll settle for this. You are an amazing writer.

you had a nice start with a good writing style and promised a lot of stuff with giving hints to a strong female oc but at this point most readers are just skimming the story because your oc is just a bystander to luffy. and what kind of dream is being second to someone I am surprised she can even do a bit of haki with such lacking ambition. she isn't even luffys first mate even though she joined before zoro now if that's not forcing canon then I dunno what is anyways it's your story so your choice thanks for the read.

Very good story. Your OC is so interesting and his interactions with the other characters are really realistic.

I hope you will write more one day.

Man, I just recently refound this fic. I'd forgotten how awesome it was ! I love Lily as a character and her interactions with everyone. Plus the way you intertwine canon stuff with original content is really well done and feels right. It's been 3 years but I'm gonna bookmark this and hope for the best.

Waaaaah~! I like this story so much and even with this chapter being slightly rushed, I had a lot of moments that made me laugh! Oh why, WHY, did such a fun story have to stop so soon, and before making it to Reverse Mountain too! X'c

On a side note, I hope you are okay. It sounded like you really wanted to continue this story, despite the sudden (to me, anyways) drop in inspiration to write.

Are you okay? Are you alive?!

Please come back, I think even Lily and the Strawhats miss you lots! Especially your loving readers (myself included). Hope to read from you soon

Ah man, I love this! It's hard finding decent reincarnation fanfics and yours is definitely one of the few and far between I've found.

Sorry I haven't really posted any reviews before this one. I started reading this and have been whizzing past chapters to remember to comment...
But I actually really love this.

I'm a bit sad that it appears you haven't updated this story for reasons I don't yet know. However, I hope you still see this review anyways, at the very least so you know there are still people out there finding and enjoying your stories years after you paused!

Well, I can't say much else, since I don't think there's anything I can say that might motivate you into getting back into this story, but I do hope you are doing okay.

I like this fic alot, some deviation from the canon is a plus for me since i like reading new stuff but this also makes it lot harder for u to write. All in all i enjoy this very much and hope u continue writing this without dropping it.