| Reviews for Forest Village Academy |
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meteor13 chapter 2 . 2/10/2019 Okay, so. Eaters Akimichi Sleepers Nara Charmers Yamanaka Dog People Inuzuka Bug People Aburame Lurkers ...ANBU? And Fighters ...Hyuuga? Or Civillian Born? |
Unknown Variable chapter 4 . 8/4/2018 that better not be orochimaru gdi is josh shikamaru? WILL THE NARA TWINS BE BACK TOGETHER AGAIN this chapter still seems to switch between first-person & third-person? like, "he tightened his grip on the hilt of my sword" and after talking about steven's mom's bad taste in men it's all "i had been [defending my mom]", so it's p confusing. |
VermilionShade chapter 4 . 3/7/2018 Sasuke remembers?! |
Vivsien chapter 4 . 11/11/2017 The first and third person switching wasn't, er, ideal, but I'm glad you updated This story is uniquely interesting. I can't help but wish the names weren't so contrastingly basic. *shakes head to refocus* Still, thanks for updating! |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/26/2017 Hello! Please don't worry about not updating; RL can get stressful and such. I'm really happy that you've updated this though! I love this idea - you've crafted a really interesting world with a really creative take on the reincarnation system. I'm really intrigued by the character dynamics you're portraying - good!Orochimaru is really interesting and I am quite sure his backstory is enthralling. I also love Shikako's place in this as a newcomer perspective who nevertheless has quite the agency and agenda here (or will, based on that hint about Danzo). Speaking of, I love the the conspiracy/plot you've sneaked in. Thank you for writing this! |
Emerald2211 chapter 4 . 10/15/2017 This story is awesome! Please update soon! |
meteor13 chapter 4 . 10/15/2017 I'm gonna take a guess and say that Kevin is Kakashi? It's either that or Itachi, but I am fairly certain that it's Kakashi. |
Greatazuredragon chapter 4 . 10/11/2017 ...in one hand I'm really happy you are updating again. But in the other, a mere 900 word chapter after a year of absence is really disappointing... Hope you update more frequently, for I think this idea has a lot of potential and enjoyed the story so far. Good work. |
Wildcatshadow chapter 4 . 10/10/2017 Dannit, now I'm curious. Who took Sasuke? Also I'm really happy to see this one update, I found it intriguing the first time I read it. |
DarkDust27 chapter 4 . 10/10/2017 I like this story so much and can't wait to see what'll happen later on. Like whether or not Steven(Sasuke) and Tyler(Naruto) will ever find out about the whole past lives and reincarnation thing? Or whether Demetria(Shikako) ever admit to her triad about her knowledge on things happening around them? |
The Real Chys Lattes chapter 4 . 10/9/2017 Switching out of first person is disorienting. |
MangoPeanutSituation chapter 4 . 10/9/2017 I'm kinda confused with all the switches between He and I, was this all in Sasuke's/Steven's POV? |
Koop chapter 4 . 10/9/2017 My brain wants to say it's Orochimaru behind he chloroform, but I can't think of any particular REASON for it to be. So I'm kinda dying to know who it is. |
incy789 chapter 4 . 10/9/2017 Robbers will be beaten by reincarnated ninjas |
incy789 chapter 1 . 10/9/2017 Thank you for continuing this FF. |