I loved it all! (Except for that Dejah was too overconfident!)

Okay, for your latest chapter, I disliked the fact that Dejah was wayyyy to overconfident, what I did like is that litlle part while Peter and Ava got a little close, it kind of sounded like one of those teenage romance novels (not that I read them). Anyway, great job yet again. (I'll try to be you just this once. Yours Truly,
Atruewarrior

Woah! I didn'tr knowz that I would like this so much! Great job, Lucifer.

Will they get their costumes fixed and will they event get back home?

Love the story but question are they in an alternate universe

I honestly liked this a whole lot more than I thought I would. Originally I thought that it would be, at best, a little bit above OK but I think it is very good boarding on great. The first things I will comment on is what I liked so far and that is how they got there that it is not just mainly the protagonists point of view and a little of the antagonist point of view but no you gave them all about the same amount of attention (bar Tar since he was just introduced and Matai). Another thing is how the characters acted (well mainly Peter) since they acted they are supposed to like with Peter adjusting to his enhanced powers and the way he act to Ava getting for the things I didn't like is, for one point, how it seems a little too fast pace(granted it only happens for about one paragraph) and how the goblins act at the beginning, but the good things definitely outweigh the bad ones and I want to see how this story continues and how you do the Dejah's and Ava's love competition.

PLEASE UPDATE!

This is really good I hope there more to come. I can't wait.

Well written for a first attempt, you succeeded in drawing me in, my only complaint now is that I need more, much more. I know that earthlings have much greater strength in the Barsoomian gravity, I can't wait to see what two trained meta humans will do.
Faved and followed, for sure