“Ami likes going out- you just have to brag her there first.” Gave me a chuckle and made me feel sympathetic towards Ami
I agree with you about Mamo’s inner voice! Definitely needs to take some action haha

Hi good morning from my side, I wanted to let you know that I loved the scene at the very end, Mamo’s internal struggle to actually want to be loved although decides against it, you pulled at my heartThere is Toki to save the day! I’m glad he is always for him.

Just finished reading this story, and loved it. Can't wait for you to finish your other stories, so I can finish reading them!

This fic was SO GOOD
I absolutely loved it
You are amazing at writing!

Awwww! Poor Mamo! :( I literally cried knowing how he felt. I really hope this is a turning point! I’m sucked in now! Lol Thank you for your wonderful writing!

Absolutely amazing story! The fact that you wrote this while going to Grad school makes me admire you more! Great job! I hope you continue writing you are great!

want a ride this story was. like the old saying goes: all good things have an end...the end of this story came too soon. hope you come up with more epic stories so i can be lost in another fantastic world.

Maaaaannn what a perfect epilogue. I’m sad that’s over. That was an emotional roller coaster of fluff and sometimes angst and it was perfection. Loved the shout out to the Shitennou and that mamoru has a ring for her already. And the sow burn made this happily ever after all the more sweeter ! Thank you. This was amazing and I hope you write more!’

Ohhhh mmmmmmmmannnnn! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL. Because of so many things?! It was super hot, and I’m for sire fanning myself over here, but also I loved the build up— I loved that it was realistic, intimate, I loved the clear moments of consent and that they used protection. I loved EVERYTHING about this beautiful lemony chapter and I’m so glad there’s an epilogue so I can see more of the After!

OMG! You totally could have ended it with that last chapter...! But then you follow up with this perfection where they have an embarrassing moment of PDA and then sit down and COMMINICATE! And then and then AND THEN THE PROMISE IF AN M RATED CHAPTER! SqueeeeallLOVE and I’m so excited! This chapter was amazing as all the ones before it and god. The description of their movements that conveys what their thinking SO WELL and then I have my room for four more hours line ?! Dying. DYING AND EXCITED TO READ!

Aw man, that was perfect. I loved how he’d resolved to be a jerk. And then she came in. Apologetic and beautiful, and he hurt her, and the felt bad and then she got mad at him and then they both exploded into a beating crescendo of passion filled AWESOMENESS.. and there was no way you could have done that better! NO WAY! It was sooo fucking fantastic! And Motoki ! Lmao king Cupid indeed! XD XD XD

OMGAWSH THE SUSPENSE THAT IS BUILDING IS UNBEARABLE I MIGHT JUST MELT AWAY FROM IT! Like. Except I get to read the next chapter right away! This is great. Internal dialogue is well written, and building up to what I have no doubt will be an awesome resolution?! GAH so good!

Yes! Usagi self revelations! Tons of awesome Usagi internal dialogue ! It was awesome gl watch the struggle, the thought process and the. BAM the epiphany! And I was like WOOT?! Out loud! Because FINALLY. They are on the same page and I’m eager to see Usagi fix this !

OMG MY HEART IS ON YHE FLOOR IN A MELTED PUDDLE OF PAIN! The ANGST ! Oh my gosh. The whole scen was adorable and she was opening up and it was so so cute with the crawling and him checking her out, to the mirrors to OMG THIS IS SO FUCKING CUTE! AND THEN. Omgawsh mamorus dialogue when Usagi was getting embarrassed and flustered and reverting to the teasing was so heartwrenching?! There was one line in there about how he thought he’d left feeling inadequate at the orphanage ?! Omg. My port mamoru and my poor silly Usagi! I knew something bad was coming and now i need to keep reading cause omg. Please tell me thi is fixed cause you evoked all the FEELS AND I NEED MYBHEART CURED

SQUEALLL! I love carnivals! And I love how freaking hard Mamoru is trying now! Being all flirty and snarky but more playful? And USAGI! He’s not firing back because he LOOVVVEEESSS YOOOU! lol I liked the details you have in here. Usagi and Minako always being late, Usagis excitement and exuberance at the carnival and the way you write Mamoru observing her! This is so slooooow burnt good! Something bad a going to happen though, right?! I can feel it. It’s coming and I’m just so glad that this story is finished or I might cry otherwise