Nice chapter

now you know how it feels to be like jiraiya

Sigue

Great story I really liked it a lot good job writing the story please update soon.

I'm fairly certain the mayor's name is Woop Slap, not Wood Slap. Oh well, nice story otherwise!.

It's rumored that Kuina's father killed her... Or, that she is alive and she is actually Tashigi.

Cool 3 chapters continue please.

This chapter was really crap compared to the other to. This chapter was the terrible cliche's. They are incredibly annoying. When an author nerfs the character it seems like the author doesn't really know what he is doing.

The chapter did have it's moments though.

Nice !

Good story, already liking it alot, and i hope kuina doesnt die, im curious thought about the last chapter you mentioned people naruto helped guide, and i can guess most of the, being jewerly, law, sanji or hawkins, and kid, but the pregnant woman i cant think of who it couldve been other than maybe rouge, ace's mother

In water 7, on the train there was a chef of the navy who uses ramen as a weapon (if I remember correctly).
Then, something takes away from Naruto to save Kuina, now looks older, hoping it is not so bad.

With Naruto personally leading the slaves to their homes, what happened with Fisher Tiger in canon will not necessarily happen now, I think at that time there was Rayleigh's interaction with Hancock (what would happen to that?).
A good chapter, awaiting the adventures of Mugiwara.

I think I saw one or two errors, but as I did not write them down and they were small I can not name them precisely.
Excellent story, I love this naruto, I would just like to know how he ended up being as he is now (the form of kyubii and all doujutsu).
Excellent interaction with Robin.
Now read the second chapter.

No... NO!
This fic was one of the very few of the Naruto/One Piece crossovers that actually had potential... And then you nerfed the beautifully OP protagonist.
That literally killed this fic in my eyes.

Did Naruto's age finally catch up to him? Is it because he saved Kuina? Who said, "This is your punishment."? Was his punishment lock on or possibly loss of chakra?