Reviews for AIE MANAWA – BORROWED TIME
Msdib chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
Great story!
Natalie Ryan chapter 4 . 6/24/2017
That's the Steve we all know. Kicking hell to make his friend feel better and get some closure.
Natalie Ryan chapter 3 . 6/24/2017
Wow, that was a lot of damage that sob did when he stabbed Danny.
Natalie Ryan chapter 2 . 6/23/2017
At least he's breathing. But, I think this won't end pretty. And we still have to know who the hell stabbed him. Worried Steve vs. injured Danny is always the best basis to start a story, that's a fact.
Natalie Ryan chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
Oh, such an explosive start to this story. My breath caught in my throat. Phew. Hope Danny is alive and he'll recover.
Sabine68 chapter 40 . 4/29/2017
Read this again and loved it even more. You are a very gifted writer. More of your work please.
spookyblack chapter 8 . 12/21/2016
Love it!
stamor2125 chapter 40 . 11/18/2016
Thank you so much for such an awesome story! I really loved it. I can't wait for your next five-0 Story! You're very lucky to have an awesome friend Cherish every moment you have together.
Oh just to let you know that Alex's back is pretty serious he is going for injections to help with relieving the pain I think. I don't think he wants to take pain pills because he got addicted to them with his previous injury and I think it was in season one the one or two episodes he missed was because he went to rehab to get off all of the meds that he got addicted too.
Well back to your story, thanks again for giving us all a great story! Not to throw my two cents in but I'm hoping you or another writer writes a story going along with last weeks episode (Grace school dance being held hostage) but more with Steve getting the news about Grace, Will and Danny being held hostage and of course Danny getting hurt (shot) trying to protect everyone. I don't know maybe something like that. I wish I could write then I would make the attempt to write a story like that.
Well not sure if your in the US or celebrate Thanksgiving if you do have a great day! And if not have a great time until your next story be safe and thanks again!️
Stacey
daleaikman chapter 40 . 11/16/2016
That was a GREAT AWSOME FANTASTIC STORY. THIS LAST CHAPTER WAS MY FAVORITE. HOW DANNY TOLD THE SRINK HOW HE REALLY FELT; WAS GREAT. AND HOW HE GOT BACK IN THE CAR AFTER ALL THAT HAPPEN;;; NOW THAT WAS DIFFERENT. LOVED HOW HE JUST DIDN'T GET IN THE CAR AND DRIVE OFF. HE ACTUALLY CHECKED EVERYTHING FIRST BEFORE HE PUT ON HIS SEATBELT AND TURNED ON THE CAR. I CANNOT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT STORY.
Elise Deschat chapter 40 . 11/15/2016
The story now ends coming full circle...Thanks for sharing your talents with us...
lenail125 chapter 40 . 11/15/2016
I liked the ending!.
TMVH50 chapter 40 . 11/15/2016
Fantastic story. This was a massive undertaking, and I certainly appreciate all of the time that you put into it. And I also appreciate the consistent updates :-)
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 40 . 11/15/2016
Glad Danny is ok and cleaned for duty. And good way to end Danny driving his car with no problem to a case. And the song perfect.
Cubit2 chapter 40 . 11/15/2016
Excellent end. I like how Danny presented his own case. He has incredible internal courage and fortitude. Your writing improved as the story progressed. Nice job. Keep writing.
Sara chapter 40 . 11/15/2016
This is my first review of fanfiction. I really enjoyed your story. I could see it as an episode, it would make a cool 2-parter! I love the friendship between the whole team, especially Steve & Danny, and you captured it great in this story :)
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