I love this story. The plot is amazing. I’m glad I pushed through the early chapters need for better formatting to get here. I can’t wait for an update.

One thing though, unless I’ve misread you have Hawaii being between England and the East coast of the USA... but it’s actually on the other side of the country. I’m not sure if you can fix it or not, but it’s a small thing that throws me out of the story when I read it. Maybe instead of Hawaii the Potter property is in the Virgin Isles?

I just realized something. They did the oath three times. Three is supposed to be magically powerful. Did you have them do it that way on purpose?

Great new chapters thank you!

Please continue to write this fiction and update soon, it's excellent writing so continue to update please.

that was another great chapter...
I think that divorcing is the best thing Heather can do right now...
having the pre-start of school dinner party was a brilliant idea...
eagerly awaiting to read more :)

P.S. stay safe and take care!

wicked thanks stay safe

Me encantó... mil gracias por actualizar, me fascina la trama y no puedo esperar a saber que esta teniendo harry!dos niños o dos niñas nuevamente? O la parejita.
Besos y cuidate en esta situacion..

just re read this story again to catch up on the last 10 chapters od not read. Still love it x

I really liked the addition to the story. Thanks for continuing.

the first part with heather finally getting a divorce was awesome! thanks for updating!

Best wishes please stay healty and safe

xxxxx Kudos xxxxx : )

Good stuff! Thanks for the updates ...

Love it !

Thomas may end up hurting his daughter.

Great chapter!