So beautiful, I cry a lot.
Why? This is so well written, every feeling!
Read End

I'm not crying, you're crying!

I hate it when good authors use their skills to write beautiful stuff that breaks people's hearts.
I love your Voltron stories

YOU MIGHT AS WELL JUST EAT MY HEART NOW THAT YOU RIPPED IT OUT AHHHHHHHHHH

i love this
but
is it actually raining?
(or is it like he thinks its rain but its tears?)

My heart- ugh. I. I cant ugh

I'll use that rain and go all' katara pissed off "you killed my mother prepare to die" mode on you.'

I'm going to start off by saying the prose is simple, but very clean, and gets to the point. With so little words you portray a large amount of emotion in this piece, and the last line was beautiful. You did the prompt well.

I didn't know what to expect when I started reading this but
I read this
I died
It was beautiful
I died
Still currently dying on feels
Great usage of words every one impaled me (sorry I'm so poetic XD)
Just omg that was so good it was beautifully sad and I'm just dying right now