| Reviews for Family Promise |
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katesnewdream chapter 5 . 7/15 So I’m loving the story, but I’m confused . . . Is it not part of unconditionally? I mean Leah, Jack, it seems like it must be but where did Tali come from? Are some of your fics missing? |
ShadowPhoenix34 chapter 14 . 7/6/2018 Yeah you think you took this to far woman! Leah would never even think of neglecting a child hers or not I mean look what she was all for doing for Eric! Goodbye and there is the door! |
ShadowPhoenix34 chapter 10 . 7/6/2018 Sorry I was busy reading the story that I forgot what I wanted to review. Funnily enough I myself live in Kansas and I actually live only 15 minutes from Topeka. I just thought that was a weird detail I had noticed. Loved the story and who could ever believe Leah of all people was a neglectful mother. |
Amber0522 chapter 15 . 5/17/2017 Is Ziva going to come back to life in one of your future stories? I love the bond Tali and Leah have! |
bjq chapter 15 . 9/14/2016 AWESOMKE. You made me cry. |
Adela chapter 15 . 9/9/2016 Love it |
DS2010 chapter 15 . 9/8/2016 Interesting conversations about Ziva. Glad little Tali will see a therapist. Not surprised Tony feeling guilty over everything. Can't wait to start the sequel |
amaia chapter 15 . 9/8/2016 Thank you for such a good story, & for no angst in the final chapter ! I already started the sequel, & hope you'll be writing more. |
Cokeheller chapter 15 . 9/7/2016 Thank you for a really great story. I loved it beginning to end. And I am happy you have given Tony a wonderful wife, Leah. |
JENTWCSINYFAN2 chapter 15 . 9/7/2016 Very nice and very good ending. I am glad they are settling into being a family and Eric is happy with The Palmers. Great story .. |
JENTWCSINYFAN2 chapter 14 . 9/6/2016 Oh so glad Tali and Jack are back home. I don't think Tony played dirty. He did what he needed to do for his family first .. Great job.. I want to know if new baby Dinozzo is a boy or girl now he he |
amaia chapter 14 . 9/6/2016 Review continued...sorry abt that... [My computer sux. I hit the Space Bar, & it sent my review b4 I was finished.] I was writing, 'when Tali said, "...take me away like ima did...", does that mean Ziva knew there was trouble coming, so she put Tali w someone else to protect her? (Somehow, I think you're getting ready to give us another angst upd8 !) |
Guest chapter 14 . 9/6/2016 Thank you, thank you, thank you for such a "calm" chapter. Tali & Jack are back where they belong, Tony & Leah can relax, & now they can concentrate on helping Tali to feel secure. I'm just wondering, though; when Tali said "...take me away like ima |
AureaD chapter 14 . 9/5/2016 I'm glad the children are back home, but poor Tali will still feel unsure that she will never be taken away from home again. It is going to take some time for her to come to terms with this. |
DS2010 chapter 14 . 9/5/2016 Glad Eric is calling Breena and Jimmy mom and dad, he finally has a home. Happy reunion at the DiNozzo house. |