Oh my God I'm super duper sad I need at least 15 Alexa to play Despacito for me. This is one of my top favorite fanfic ever but alas. Over all you have a great style of writing and it's awesome how you managed to keep everyone in character. You're also crazy good at implementing your character inside the story.I hope you continue to write great stories such as this one again in the future! Keep up the awesome work! Also can you at least tell me who was the 4th soul?Hahaha. I've always been thinking about it! Push me off this cliffhanger please.

axel x chara
yes plz

well i had asumed this story would be discontinued around the time they are all seperated before the time-skip but this is alright to, thanks for the nice story

make axel op plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sampi

happy to see this story is not dead

Ace is overrated. People only remember him for his death.

Fuck you Axel. Nobody cares about your birthday
Heathen scum

gah I always get super excited when u update! the story is going so well. Im dying to read more of Axel's development!

I can wait when they address his 'issuse' and wound.

Heh, poor .

Holy Fart master, your awesome! At first i d idnt like your story, but it grew on me faster than skin cancer did that 1 scene from deadpool the movie. I can't wait till frisk pops up and his stat increase is the flirt ability success chance XD . Will sans and brook hit it off like the skele brothers form another undead mothers I known that are?

-a boi who finally managed to "ketchup" on your story, and found it a real "rib tickler"

continua la historia profa esta increíble.

Plz update! I love Axel!

ho my XD

I love this