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how did Kiritsugu know Dante's name?

And once again I have part of my review cut, Now I have a few questions that I need to ask.

Question 1: Dante's Arrival. How did Dante get to the Type Moon Universe? you did not tell us or show us how he got their? Did Zelretch play one of his pranks on Sparda's family?

Question 2: Dante's love life. Since Type Moon's Fate Stay/Night's visual novel and anime adaptations are love stories who are you going to pair Dante with? Saber? Rin? Sakura? Medusa? Medea? or is Dante getting a harem with the before mentioned women? Because I see a young high school aged cocky Dante acting like a play boy but I would not want to be Dante when loses her temper or if he forgets to feed Saber(Dante when that happens, just run away man!).

Question 3: Fate Routes. What Fate Route in the visual novel is Dante going to go through? The Fate route? Unlimited Blade Works? Or Heavens Feel? If I may make a suggestion I think it would be awesome if Dante went through the Fate Route and gain the true ending from the Realta Nua patch in the visual novel but with some elements of the Unlimited Blade Works. Those elements from UBW being Dante manifesting the Unlimited Works and having a show down with Archer and tag teaming with Saber to take down Gilgamesh and Kotomine.

Question 4: Will Dante go down his adventures in the Pre Reboot Devil May Cry series? Because that would put Dante into Heroic Spirit levels off accomplishments and skill and power just to make the guy a beast!

Oh this is going to be fun! Now I have a challenge for you. It is a Final Fantasy 6 High School DxD crossover with an OC son of Bahamut as one of the main protagonists. Now let me state the premise of the story and the role of Bahamut, his son's role in the story, and how Bahamut got to the DxD world, and Bahamut and his son's powers. If you cannot do it yourself that's fine but please put this in your profile and possibly consider doing it at a later date as I cannot get an account due to problems with my computer getting bugs every time I try to officially log in.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 1: Bahamut's Arrival in DxD. At the end of Final Fantasy 6 Bahamut and the other Espers had faded away after the death of Kefka Pelatzo when he became the God of Magic, Bahamut after nearly fading from existence had survived by a miracle with the other espers giving Bahamut their powers. Bahamut after traveling throughout the Cosmos eventually arrived to the DXD world before the Three Factions had started their war and when he arrived Bahamut with his immense powers eventually created a paradise world just outside of The Dimension Gap were Dragons are free to roam without fear of being hunted or having to tie themselves to any faction to survive and prosper as a species. Bahamut also returned temporarily to the Final Fantasy worlds(including spinoffs) starting with the world of Final Fantasy 6 and rallied the dragons from those worlds to live in this new world and many dragons from the DxD world along with the Fairies and other supernatural creatures building a world that blends magic with science and is a paradise world. Also when creating this world Bahamut became the Father of the Neo Esper race. However when the war of the Three Factions starts with the Original Devils slaying the Messiah(see A Demon Among Devil's by The Crimson Lord)Bahamut steps in when the conflict threatens to spill into the world of Terra Draconis(which is twice the size of Planet Jupiter)and fights both Albion and Y Ddraig Goch and holds his own against both of them at the same time due to them making the situation worse for Dragon kind in DxD and Terra Draconis and other supernatural creatures moving to Terra Draconis and now calling it home. When the Three Factions team up to seal away Albion, Ddraig, and Bahamut, Bahamut has to be the only one of those dragons to immediately break free from his would be prison and slays the original Maou in retaliation and lands a deadly blow on God Himself that eventually kills God. For Bahamut's appearance go with his look in FF6 or FF8.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 2: The Might of Bahamut. Bahamut when traveling throughout the Cosmos eventually comes to each of the Final Fantasy Worlds at the end of their games and acquires all the powers, assimilate the powers and essences of all of Bahamut's alternates on all the Final Fantasy Worlds at the end of their games when he is traveling the cosmos with their souls merging in perfect harmony with his own, gains their knowledge, techniques, special abilities, and their powers added to his own, can transform into their various different forms that Bahamut has across the franchise, take a human form, Etc., Etc. and in terms of power in the DxD hierarchy is above Albion and Ddraig but be just beneath Ophis, Great Red and Trihexa in strength.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 3: Bahamut's Personality. Bahamut's personality has to be strong willed, fierce, proud, but caring for his people along with being a good leader who puts himself in the fray when things get ugly and is also a good father in that he cares for his son's well being and will do all that he can for his son and other children. Bahamut also has to have the sense of values of a mature man with immeasurable wisdom and when situations aren't serious and when he is not working on managing a empire that spans an entire planet he is rather playful and be a bit of a trickster pulling harmless pranks.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 4: The Son of Bahamut, Seiryuu and his powers. Seiryuu's powers have to have the DxD special of Senjutsu and Nordic Runes along with Seiryuu learning all the full powers of the classic Final Fantasy's Black, White, Red, and Blue Mages along with all the powers that Bahamut has throughout the Final Fantasy franchise and in this story along with taking a Dragon Form. Also just to make him not a carbon copy of his old man Seiryuu has to obtain these abilities along with the ones previously stated such as having immense durability and being able to go into an outrage mode learning Elemental magic, Alchemy, Nordic Runes, Shamanism, such as astral projection, conversing with Animal, Plant, ghosts of the dearly departed, and Nature spirits and evoking those spirits for help in battle and healing his allies and for knowledge, and finally Senjutsu. It would be awesome for Seiryuu to learn Senjutsu as DxD Dragons are masses of pure power given form from the creation of the world itself. Senjutsu involves using one's life force in harmony with the energy of Nature creating a constant current of power it does not stack up demonic magic or the Holy Light in sheer destructive power but the current is constant and add that with all the other powers that Seiryuu has and we have a beast who can hold out till the end of the fight.

A Neo Dragon's Era part 5: Seriryuu's personality. Seiryuu has to be at the end of the story in terms of personality be able to keep a level head throughout dangerous situations and be very courageous and intelligent along with being loyal, honest, free spirited, and a tad mischievous. But in the beginning of the story when he stumbles upon his powers and heritage at an early age he has to wonder where he belongs in the world as he is a half human half dragon demigod and wonder if he is a freak or not. At the beginning of DxD he is an emo due to thinking that he is monster and that his biological parents did not want him, but he can be a bit hotheaded if you call him a monster, a freak, or mess with his friends and family. Seiryuu also has to be more solitary than Issei and is a tad antisocial in the beginning of the story due him thinking that freaks do not deserve friends and him thinking that they will shun him if people realize what he is. For Seiryuu's role and origins in the story he has to be one of the main characters and go through the DxD storyline along with his brother but not become a Devil.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 6: Seiryuu's Origins. For Seiryuu's origin when Bahamut after one of his business ventures in the Supernatural Worlds, took a vacation in the human world and fell in love with and eventually married and later knocked up a human witch after a beautiful and loving relationship that blossomed for years. She has to be in terms of personality and appearance a mixture of Risty from Queen's blade and Bayonetta, from Bayonetta in looks and personality. However she died in childbirth after refusing medical help after saving a child from a demon of the Old Satan Faction to make sure the kid was okay and making sure Seiryuu was born into the world due to birth complications. Bahamut worrying for his sons safety due to his status of being the son and heir of the True Dragon King, The Dragon God of War, and The Dragon King of the Skies(Final Fantasy Bahamut's DxD Titles)decided to leave him as a baby with the Hyoudou family who then adopted him and raised him as their own along side Issei.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 7: Seiryuu and Issei's Harems. In true DxD fashion Seiryuu and Issei have to have a Harem and I have a list of women who would fit for them.

Seiryuu's Harem: 1. Kuroka. 2. Rosswiess. Number 3. Tiamat. Number 4. Akeno. Number 5. Kalawarner. Number 6. Serafall Leviathan. Number 7 Xenovia Quarta.

Issei's harem 1. Rias Gremory. 2. Koneko. 3 Asia. 4 Ravel. 5 Irina.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 8: Seiryuu's enemies. As the son of Bahamut Seiryuu has to have enemies from both angelic camps, the upper echelons of the church as Bahamut was the dragon who caused God's Death and when the Church finds out that Bahamut had a kid they end up vilifying and demonizing Seiryuu so they can have an excuse to have his head on a silver plate. Seiryuu scoring popularity points with the Church along with the Angels of Heaven is not going to happen because of his origins and they would see him as an abomination because they somehow found out about his father's origins from being beyond the Dimensional Gap and how the Espers were created to be living weapons of the Warring Triad and Seiryuu's own heritage and being feared by the Angels both pure and Fallen for his potential and growth due to his heritage and with some of the Angels wanting to kill him for what his old man did. The Hero Brigade should want his head on a plate so they can have the glory of slaying a powerful dragon and the Old Satan Faction wants to control him as a living weapon against their enemies like the original Espers. Also some of the Angels when the Peace Summit goes down successfully want his head on a pike and when they cannot get some revenge they become Rogue Angel's(not Fallen Angels or the likes of Lucifer)who join the Chaos Brigade to try and remake the world in their own image and what they thought God would want the world to be.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 9: Seiryuu's weakness's. As a Half Human Half Esper Dragon demigod Seiryuu has to be weak to Dragon Slaying Weapons but he does have the capacity to overcome that weakness to the point it becomes little more deadly than a bug bite at the end of the story but until he trains with his dad and the other Dragon Kings it is his Achilles Heel.

Okay now here is my review after re reading it. Nice pacing and aside from a few sentence structuring problems and grammar(see Dante's speech patterns and lack of parenthesis) We have a good premise. Dante is maximum Dante and all the character's are well in character which is always nice.

Now I have a few questio

Oh this is going to be fun! Now I have a challenge for you. It is a Final Fantasy 6 High School DxD crossover with an OC son of Bahamut as one of the main protagonists. Now let me state the premise of the story and the role of Bahamut, his son's role in the story, and how Bahamut got to the DxD world, and Bahamut and his son's powers. If you cannot do it yourself that's fine but please put this in your profile and possibly consider doing it at a later date as I cannot get an account due to problems with my computer getting bugs every time I try to officially log in.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 1: Bahamut's Arrival in DxD. At the end of Final Fantasy 6 Bahamut and the other Espers had faded away after the death of Kefka Pelatzo when he became the God of Magic, Bahamut after nearly fading from existence had survived by a miracle with the other espers giving Bahamut their powers. Bahamut after traveling throughout the Cosmos eventually arrived to the DXD world before the Three Factions had started their war and when he arrived Bahamut with his immense powers eventually created a paradise world just outside of The Dimension Gap were Dragons are free to roam without fear of being hunted or having to tie themselves to any faction to survive and prosper as a species. Bahamut also returned temporarily to the Final Fantasy worlds(including spinoffs) starting with the world of Final Fantasy 6 and rallied the dragons from those worlds to live in this new world and many dragons from the DxD world along with the Fairies and other supernatural creatures building a world that blends magic with science and is a paradise world. Also when creating this world Bahamut became the Father of the Neo Esper race. However when the war of the Three Factions starts with the Original Devils slaying the Messiah(see A Demon Among Devil's by The Crimson Lord)Bahamut steps in when the conflict threatens to spill into the world of Terra Draconis(which is twice the size of Planet Jupiter)and fights both Albion and Y Ddraig Goch and holds his own against both of them at the same time due to them making the situation worse for Dragon kind in DxD and Terra Draconis and other supernatural creatures moving to Terra Draconis and now calling it home. When the Three Factions team up to seal away Albion, Ddraig, and Bahamut, Bahamut has to be the only one of those dragons to immediately break free from his would be prison and slays the original Maou in retaliation and lands a deadly blow on God Himself that eventually kills God. For Bahamut's appearance go with his look in FF6 or FF8.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 2: The Might of Bahamut. Bahamut when traveling throughout the Cosmos eventually comes to each of the Final Fantasy Worlds at the end of their games and acquires all the powers, assimilate the powers and essences of all of Bahamut's alternates on all the Final Fantasy Worlds at the end of their games when he is traveling the cosmos with their souls merging in perfect harmony with his own, gains their knowledge, techniques, special abilities, and their powers added to his own, can transform into their various different forms that Bahamut has across the franchise, take a human form, Etc., Etc. and in terms of power in the DxD hierarchy is above Albion and Ddraig but be just beneath Ophis, Great Red and Trihexa in strength.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 3: Bahamut's Personality. Bahamut's personality has to be strong willed, fierce, proud, but caring for his people along with being a good leader who puts himself in the fray when things get ugly and is also a good father in that he cares for his son's well being and will do all that he can for his son and other children. Bahamut also has to have the sense of values of a mature man with immeasurable wisdom and when situations aren't serious and when he is not working on managing a empire that spans an entire planet he is rather playful and be a bit of a trickster pulling harmless pranks.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 4: The Son of Bahamut, Seiryuu and his powers. Seiryuu's powers have to have the DxD special of Senjutsu and Nordic Runes along with Seiryuu learning all the full powers of the classic Final Fantasy's Black, White, Red, and Blue Mages along with all the powers that Bahamut has throughout the Final Fantasy franchise and in this story along with taking a Dragon Form. Also just to make him not a carbon copy of his old man Seiryuu has to obtain these abilities along with the ones previously stated such as having immense durability and being able to go into an outrage mode learning Elemental magic, Alchemy, Nordic Runes, Shamanism, such as astral projection, conversing with Animal, Plant, ghosts of the dearly departed, and Nature spirits and evoking those spirits for help in battle and healing his allies and for knowledge, and finally Senjutsu. It would be awesome for Seiryuu to learn Senjutsu as DxD Dragons are masses of pure power given form from the creation of the world itself. Senjutsu involves using one's life force in harmony with the energy of Nature creating a constant current of power it does not stack up demonic magic or the Holy Light in sheer destructive power but the current is constant and add that with all the other powers that Seiryuu has and we have a beast who can hold out till the end of the fight.

A Neo Dragon's Era part 5: Seriryuu's personality. Seiryuu has to be at the end of the story in terms of personality be able to keep a level head throughout dangerous situations and be very courageous and intelligent along with being loyal, honest, free spirited, and a tad mischievous. But in the beginning of the story when he stumbles upon his powers and heritage at an early age he has to wonder where he belongs in the world as he is a half human half dragon demigod and wonder if he is a freak or not. At the beginning of DxD he is an emo due to thinking that he is monster and that his biological parents did not want him, but he can be a bit hotheaded if you call him a monster, a freak, or mess with his friends and family. Seiryuu also has to be more solitary than Issei and is a tad antisocial in the beginning of the story due him thinking that freaks do not deserve friends and him thinking that they will shun him if people realize what he is. For Seiryuu's role and origins in the story he has to be one of the main characters and go through the DxD storyline along with his brother but not become a Devil.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 6: Seiryuu's Origins. For Seiryuu's origin when Bahamut after one of his business ventures in the Supernatural Worlds, took a vacation in the human world and fell in love with and eventually married and later knocked up a human witch after a beautiful and loving relationship that blossomed for years. She has to be in terms of personality and appearance a mixture of Risty from Queen's blade and Bayonetta, from Bayonetta in looks and personality. However she died in childbirth after refusing medical help after saving a child from a demon of the Old Satan Faction to make sure the kid was okay and making sure Seiryuu was born into the world due to birth complications. Bahamut worrying for his sons safety due to his status of being the son and heir of the True Dragon King, The Dragon God of War, and The Dragon King of the Skies(Final Fantasy Bahamut's DxD Titles)decided to leave him as a baby with the Hyoudou family who then adopted him and raised him as their own along side Issei.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 7: Seiryuu and Issei's Harems. In true DxD fashion Seiryuu and Issei have to have a Harem and I have a list of women who would fit for them.

Seiryuu's Harem: 1. Kuroka. 2. Rosswiess. Number 3. Tiamat. Number 4. Akeno. Number 5. Kalawarner. Number 6. Serafall Leviathan. Number 7 Xenovia Quarta.

Issei's harem 1. Rias Gremory. 2. Koneko. 3 Asia. 4 Ravel. 5 Irina.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 8: Seiryuu's enemies. As the son of Bahamut Seiryuu has to have enemies from both angelic camps, the upper echelons of the church as Bahamut was the dragon who caused God's Death and when the Church finds out that Bahamut had a kid they end up vilifying and demonizing Seiryuu so they can have an excuse to have his head on a silver plate. Seiryuu scoring popularity points with the Church along with the Angels of Heaven is not going to happen because of his origins and they would see him as an abomination because they somehow found out about his father's origins from being beyond the Dimensional Gap and how the Espers were created to be living weapons of the Warring Triad and Seiryuu's own heritage and being feared by the Angels both pure and Fallen for his potential and growth due to his heritage and with some of the Angels wanting to kill him for what his old man did. The Hero Brigade should want his head on a plate so they can have the glory of slaying a powerful dragon and the Old Satan Faction wants to control him as a living weapon against their enemies like the original Espers. Also some of the Angels when the Peace Summit goes down successfully want his head on a pike and when they cannot get some revenge they become Rogue Angel's(not Fallen Angels or the likes of Lucifer)who join the Chaos Brigade to try and remake the world in their own image and what they thought God would want the world to be.

A Neo Dragon's Era Part 9: Seiryuu's weakness's. As a Half Human Half Esper Dragon demigod Seiryuu has to be weak to Dragon Slaying Weapons but he does have the capacity to overcome that weakness to the point it becomes little more deadly than a bug bite at the end of the story but until he trains with his dad and the other Dragon Kings it is his Achilles Heel.

give dante kiritsgus magecraft time alter double excel and possibly orgin bullets that kiritsugu uses

Thus is pretty good. Though your sentence structure is a little weird sometimes. I'm guessing that English isn't your first language. If that's the case, then I recommend you get a native English speaker to proofread for you.

Interesting...

Nice pacing and aside from a few sentence structuring problems and grammar(see Dante's speech patterns and lack of parenthesis) We have a good premise. Dante is maximum Dante and all the character's are well in character which is always nice.

Now I have a few questions that I need to ask.

Question 1: Dante's Arrival. How did Dante get to the Type Moon Universe? you did not tell us or show us how he got their? Did Zelrecth play one of his pranks on Sparda's family?

Question 2: Dante's love life. Since Type Moon's Fate Stay/Night's visual novel and anime adaptations are love stories who are you going to pair Dante with? Saber? Rin? Sakura? Medusa? Medea? or is Dante getting a harem with the before mentioned women? Because I see a young high school aged cocky Dante acting like a play boy but I would not want to be Dante when loses her temper or if he forgets to feed Saber(Dante when that happens, just run away man!).

Question 3: Fate Routes. What Fate Route in the visual novel is Dante going to go through? The Fate route? Unlimited Blade Works? Or Heavens Feel? If I may make a suggestion I think it would be awesome if Dante went through the Fate Route and gain the true ending from the Realta Nua patch in the visual novel but with some elements of the Unlimited Blade Works. Those elements from UBW being Dante manifesting the Unlimited Works and having a show down with Archer and tag teaming with Saber to take down Gilgamesh and Kotomine.

You know Dante is going to slaughter them. But I'm a fan of both story so I'm game

Well not bad I think, try not to rush things and don't make Dante copy of Shirou in terms of magecraft considering he is a Cambion I expect much more from him.

Not bad but englishe isn't your first language right ?

Interesting

Nice beginning although I wish you would have let me known.