The End... I don't think so... this story has legs!

this is a cute story I really like it

I'm always interested in putting some focus on the characters Kubo wronged by ignoring them. And this... might be the crackest of pairs, but I get it. I like it. I think it was strongest when it was about Yuzu's nightly training with her Captain. The thing with Squad 0 was... eh, it wasn't bad, but probably could have been condensed. Ichigo was getting annoying.

Then it ended.

Like... just... did you run out of ideas? The cut to the future and the telling of it were both pretty awkward.

I know it's been a few years and you're apparently hilariously productive, so it's likely something you've improved, but I give feedback for the story I read.

WhErEs tHe rEsT Of iT?!

I understand you wanted a cool moment for Yuzu, and this is a cool idea, but making Soi Fon that weak is lame. She's a Captain. She was the main person responsible for defeating Espada 2 and she actually stabbed Aizen, which I think makes her the only person other than Ichigo to do so.

Very Good Story! Ever thought about writing a sequel?

Wow. Simply wow.

I think if pushed.. Ichigo could kill Yama.

WWWWWWHHHHHHHHHyYYYYYYYY? why It Have to be over?

Also can I take this story and continue it possibly? With your permission, cause you started it

Sweet story

Very nice story, great work

Nice:-)

oh, such a nice ending. i like it,

Heartwarming.

Hm very cute and conclusive ending, if not a little rushed. Still enjoyed this story even if it did lull at times.