This is my first D-Greyman fanfiction and I really like what you did was it. I do hope you update more in the future.

MANA'S EYES TURNED GOLD, MANA'S EYES TURNED GOLD! also this chapter made me think of what mana looks like without his clown getup, unless the ladies legit just flirted with him in the clown costume which i mean i guess? also mana calling ellen, allen, like oof. I feel like something is going to happen to nathan because of his business as a phantomhive and then itll maybe lead into his death where ellen turns hIM into an akuma instead of mana?! unless im reading too much into it..

damn, and here i was comparing them all to various noah family members but tHEY'RE ALL FROM THE PHANTOMHIVE FAMILY which black butler reference but how exactly that will play out i am super curious about

Allen the doggy dying was so sad, i just remember the scene in the anime and ughhh so heartbreaking. im kinda wondering if fate is a part of the story in that ellen will constantly be meeting the same people allen met...I do wonder tho if mana senses something different about ellen, in the story it feels like he's almost attuned to how she feels

I laughed a little too much at the Naruto reincarnation bit lol, but I especially love the easy acceptance of the the protagonist's reincarnation, I'm just a little too tired of reading stories where the mc laments her death for a bit too much and this story seems like a promising refresher. When Nathan was introduced I immediately thought of Tyki but it might be too early to tell. I feel like no matter how much Ellen tries to avoid following the actual storyline, people will find her

Neat story, too bad it’s been so many years since it last updated, I’ll still follow just in case since there haven’t been many Si Oc D Gray Man fanfics, especially ones where the oc is Allen and the development in the story is actually paced and detailed. I really liked the black butler references scattered in, and the music box bit definitely opens up a large aspect of her reincarnation and what it means and how it happened, so if this continues I’d love to find out more about that. Ellen’s relationship with Nathan and Mana are adorable and I really hope to see this continue someday; all in all, I really liked your story with the way you wrote it and what you’ve done with it.

i really am in love with this fic. i hope someday u will find ur passion for this fic and continue this.

Ohhh Lizzy grew up spicy, I like her.

Absolutely stunning

Oh my this fic is awesome. I love ellen nathan and mana. The bit about phantomhive is awesome too. I love this fic so so much. Pls pls dont abandon this fic. I need u to update this fic. Write more soon please.

I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Please update soon please

Really hope you continue this fic.

Where's Mana?!
By the way, I love your story ;)

That's what you get for trying to avoid the original storyline ;)
That's quite funny, and cute ;)