Lol that a/n in the beginning was funny, however don't think I forgot what u promised us, I'll be waiting for that vivixLelouch

Good stuff I'll keep reading for now

Am I the only one who feels Lelouch over reacted in the sence where he was talking to vergo and I know I've already said this but sabertooth chill your getting to invested into lelouch. Final thing, who are these twins. I've must've missed so thing when I was skimming though the earlier chapters.

I really how you made lelouch's character except for the fact of his overly close relationship whith saber, other than that you could barely tel the difference between the original and this. Also you're weak for crying at the death of spiderman.

Good stuff, that's all I have to say right now cause I got to read the next chapter

Yo.. just wanted to say, I liked linkin park too, and finnaly the story is getting good, but after reading this you need to make vivixLelouch ship

Congratulations, and yes alabasta FINNALY

I'm fine with fillers but to me fillers should be used till the Middle or end of the story. Fillers in the beginning of the story is Bullshit, I personally would like to read the main plot move on first then Fillers

Lelouchxwanda

I dont know... but Lelouch and saber seems pretty gay in this chapter. But seriously, if u could tone down there friendship, in my opinion that would be great

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Bro i read to chptr 12 amd i gotta say i love it please keep it up
And i hopye you get to complete it
And btw
Lelouchxnico

To be fair trough I've the bad habit to read really fast, so I could have read bad something. I also have a problem of very annoying readers, who too often complain about how I act in the fandom, hoping you solved that. Keep up the good work and see you soon.

I was just in search of a good One Piece crossover and this is just what the doctor ordered. Just amazing introspection about Lelouch and those around him, even the various events are portrayed with a delicious atmosphere of danger. My only complain is about the fights, you describe tecniques very well, but longer fights, which are the spine of One Piece, are slightly band.

Chapter ten: I wpuld like to add my two cents for a bit more drama.
Original
[The hand holding the pirate tightened even more, crushing the bones of the jaws very slowly. Muffled whimpers and cries could have been heard, had the city not been this busy in preparing defenses for an oncoming assault and bloodshed from the rebels. The valid hand blurred forward, silencing the Baroque Works agent for good. Blood poured through Lelouch's hand, but he didn't care: his head was raised towards the sky as he looked at the beautiful weather. This same weather that would probably carry an aura of death, should Crocodile's plan come to fruition.

"Alabasta won't die," Lelouch finally murmured.

And this was a promise.]

My little edit:
The hand holding the pirate tightened even more, crushing the bones of the jaws very slowly. Muffled whimpers and cries could have been heard, had the city not been this busy in preparing defenses for an oncoming assault and bloodshed from the rebels. The valid hand blurred forward, silencing the Baroque Works agent for good. Blood poured through Lelouch's hand, as it spurt out blood like a fountain and stained through his clothes as it keep on spraying more blood while the body never fully reached the full embrace of the road due to it bumping on Lelouch's knee, but he didn't care: his head was raised towards the sky as he looked at the beautiful rain that he shall make. This same weather that would probably carry an aura of death, should Crocodile's plan come to fruition.

"Alabasta won't die," Lelouch finally murmured.

And this was a promise.