Ugh, your stories give me the worst of the feels... great story. The Raito/Kira relationship is built beautifully, and L's regret is simply heartbreaking.
It's sad to see Raito's family not support him, especially Soichiro. I felt as if he would have at least had enough faith in his son and would try to personally see everything through.
I can't wait to read more. Keep up the fantastic work!
Happy writing :)
~WAC

This is a pretty interesting story, and the idea is certainly original. I'd like to see what happens next!

OOoooooOoOooooH I'm so into this now **

Another amazing Story.
I've read all your Fanfiction and I simply can't believe your how incredible your writing. You express the feelings and pychotic thought marvellously.
Please continue with your amazing work!

So I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'm really intrigued. I think you write very well and your grasp of Light's personality and him as a character is perfect. To be honest I've always been Team Light, but your rendition makes me feel towards him even more. His own warped expectations for himself is probably his biggest flaw, so I'm really excited to see where this goes!

This is actually very good. Although, Light not guessing Rem's actions wasn't really believable. Waiting for another chapter, nice work so far!

Great job :) Keep it up, you are one of the best writers I have seen for quite awhile. Not to mention actually caught my interest :p I think this is going great so keep up the good work!

I'm really loving this so far. it's interesting, and I love the interactions between Light and Kira.

Santa Maria!

Just what—dude, get an Oscar.