Rip

Did anyone pick up the story?

Please make more chapters

Another cliffhanger after a year? I’m dropping all stories you’ve made. If you abandon them no ones going to read the rest. Not until someone picks up the pieces and continues where you left off. Seriously, people will take your idea and your original story will be lost to the winds. Just another trash fic.

Dead

Like the concept but the dialogue drives me nuts

I don't know if you fully plan on continuing this, but this story is solid with slight problems of you undermining yourself with certain decisions in terms of how you write things. That being said you wrote a fairly competent and a decent in quality story that I see a lot of potential in so if you plan on going further just keep at it you've got this!

Sorry, but the dialogue is not written well. It's really stiff and awkward. Instead of hearing the characters talk, what I'm imagining is a bunch of people reading the script poorly.

You haven’t published in a year.

For alex ghoul mask, I suggest the mask all for one from my hero academia or bane from dc comics.

is dis ded? cuz dis is sum gud shite rite here

I understand why but Alex Mercer is cold blooded not some pussy whose afraid to do stuff just because

Alex behaves like a shitty OC that has some of Alex Mercer's powers.

You've written Alex like he's some kind of idiot.
He's basically a conglomeration of geniuses and soldiers.

Nonsense! The story is alright for the most part, people are just picky about everything, sadly this story seems to be dead, on the bright side it holds multiple chapters to go back and read through again