So nice to read a whole story from Edwards point of view. Truly a lovely take on what is my least favourite book in the series ( New Moon) so looking forward to reading part two.

Thank you

please don't remove this x

Very nice! I LOVED Seth in this story!
2 quick little factual issues: First, you had Edward saying "Lonnie" (the Port Angeles guy) was executed, but there is no way he would have been yet. It had only been a year or so since Carlisle left him in front of a Portland police station, and those who are given a death sentence are given a number of mandatory appeals (it takes years! I'm from Texas - one of, if not THE, biggest state when it comes to capital punishment). Second, the vehicle you had Seth mentioning is not legal in the US. Later Edward was thinking something about renting one in Italy, so I suppose that could work if he could manage to find one available to rent (I googled the car to see what it looked like, how fast it was, etc, and it said there had only been 140 made as of 2018). That particular model hasn't been crash tested here, so it is not legal to drive (though I admit that wouldn't likely stop Edward...lol).

Really inspired confrontation. I'm re-reading so I can enjoy your update even more. Still a very enjoyable and original read. Thank you

Wonderful. Thanks

Awesome ending I love it.

This is a freaking awesome chapter.

Sweet.

Awesome.

Very cool.

Nice

Very nice

Freaking awesome

Wow what's next?

Awesome chapter I love ir.