I love this! Jaspis is a guilty pleasure so I try not to indulge but the dynamic here is so compelling...

Great job, I wish you'd write more!

whoaaa...this was great :) :) :)

Once again you to the fanfiction community that you are an AMAZING writer. I can totally see Jasper thinking all of these thoughts of wanting to be Malachite again.

This was very well written. You did a great job expressing Jasper's thoughts. I love it. ;3

God that was heavy. Terrific story. Keep it up!

Wow! This was an experience.

Short but bittersweet. A delightfully disturbing look into Jasper's ever more messed up psyche.

Deep. And Dark. I quite liked it.

Its so hard to find good Jasper fics here, especially non redeeming fics. This sounds great. I love it.

Whoa now that was some deep and intense writing excellent job my friend bravo

This is surprisingly decent. Most SU fanfics are crap on here.

This certainly hits home to my idea of how Jasper felt during Alone at Sea. Heck, this might be an inspiration for my own story! Anyway, very well written! I hope that you might write more Jaspis...? XD

The end of this was depressing as hell. Very well written.

Wow that was really good. I really needed something like this after the shocking events of Alone at Sea. I don't think I've ever reflected so much on an episode like that one so reading this was amazing. Really adds another perspective I didn't think about.

Too bad Lapis said no