Delete this account and these stories. Some of them were good but we don't need a quitter. You weren't busy, you justo wanted to quit and that's OK but deleite everything yours from here.

I think it's cute and funny, you portrayed Asuna perfectly.

I'm surprised that you did a SAO fanfic, but that doesn't mean that this was good. I really liked how you gave reference to the extra edition. You did grest with this fic and glad to see your a fan of it as well.

Well, it was cute to read, even if the characters were a bit OOC ) Also, you wrote everyone's real names in the narration and how they called each other except for Silica and Klein, which felt kinda weird (Silica's real name is Keiko and Klein's Ryoutarou). Also, they're all used to call each other, except Sugu, by their in-game names even IRL, so Keiko usually calls Rika 'Liz-san' even in reality, same with Asuna and Kirito calling her 'Liz'. And no one calls Shino Asada, they more usually call her just straight our Sinon because of Kirito, but the names mix-up aside, it was kinda enjoyable to read . Later!