Please update!

I love this story and I loved the original. I wish I could see how this ends! There’s so much epicness whether it’s the beauty in how you write Kakashi and sakuras feeling for each other and their child or the depth you built in each chapter. Please come back to this!

I'm hoping this redo means better portrayal of sakura and Kakashi's character(no sakura as a cheating backstabbing bitch, and Kakashi as a no good sanctimonious traitor). If not, kill the story. you'll just be destroying Sakuras character portrayal in Naruto.

Love it! Please keep going!

Nice! Totally different feel somehow than the other story. Sakura seems a bit older in this one which is refreshing.

oomg... im broken... i didnt notice this incomplete]]huhuhuhuhuuhuhuhuhuh

I really like your rewrite version, much more than the old one. It's not like the old one is bad, but this new version is more in depth, more mature and angsty. I only read the original fic up to chapter two, but I have to come back and leave you a comment. I hope that you will update soon :D

I'm in love with this!

My first review I've ever left on this site goes to you (and I've read quite a few stories). Your plot is wonderful and your characters are very believable. I'm enjoying the newer version of the story although the original was still very well written. I'm glad someone wrote a story involving Yamato. He needs more fan service! I hope you find your inspiration to continue this fic. You've kept this reader extremely entertained and excited to read more. Great job!

Please please update soon! I've been waiting so long for this story!

Im so excited for this story! I hope that you'll update soon :)

Perfect! I can't wait to read more of the new content! I hope rewriting and revising it opens up wider possibilities to make this story even greater

I'm glad you updated, even though it's a re written version. Hope you update soon! I've been waiting for your writing :)

More? Yes!?

Love the rewrite already but love that you're back even more! One thing though, a person cannot be allergic to epinephrine, as it is a naturally occurring hormone in the human body.. Also known as adrenaline. Maybe switch the allergy to penicillin or ibuprofen? Keep up the good work!
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