Okay. Snake's uniform on you and them.

I swear I've read this story before, but it had reached the conclusion in the Underworld and Maxine kidnapped Hermione and brought her there. Did you take it down and rewrite it?

More soon please

More soon please

it ends rather abruptly, like it should be the start of their affair now, and their takedown of the ministry, but it just ends.

contriving breakfast pit of thin air?
do you mean conjuring?
goes against gamp's law

I like the premise of this story.
I don't like Hermione presented as weak, foolish, and unable to plan.
I think the plot is good.

it's a good start, but if she's going that route, why not escape Brittain with her wand? or Marry Neville to hide her time?
also, why would she be a mediwitch (nurse equivalent) instead of a healer (doctor equivalent)?

I love this. please continue.

Boa história ! Eu amo isso ! Mal posso esperar para ler mais.

More soon please

A lovely story! Thank you!

I loved this so much, I love how you changed the world and weaved the story. It was an excellent read and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I notice the last chapter says epilogue 1, is that the end or is there more?

Ok. I tried, I really did. I just can’t anymore. To be blunt, while trying to be kind as well, your grammar and such is really poor and eventually couldn’t be ignored any longer. While I get that you are writing in a language that is not native to you, you still should at least run a spellcheck of sorts to at least catch obvious things. Any document program should have a basic spell and grammar check in the language you’re writing for. I’m not talking about obvious translation issues that are hard to do but just the basic sentence structure including punctuation.

love it!