Reviews for Never Ending |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great so far and loving the chapter length :p |
![]() ![]() This is good. Write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, well, my friend... Haah~ This second chapter was lovely. It was absolutely lovely~ Again: the bittersweet, sweet angst was just beautiful and you used it was a perfect tool. The mood shifts, the changes in perspective, the lovely dialogue...especially~ when Widowmaker was about to put the moves on Tracer, only to reel back because it "didn't feel right"...ohhhh hoh, yeees~ *O* And also...ooohhh, you sneaky, sneaky devil, you~! You had Tracer have a night of passion with none other than Sombra~? *O* Daaayum! This was great~! Update ASAP! That's an order! Semper-Fi! Carry on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn really good please add just 20 more chapters! That's not hard right? Also.. hope u feel better |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good! I cant wait for your next update. Hope you get better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story, I really would love to see more of it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm in love with this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() A little bit of Sombra anyways cool fic really liking it so far. |
![]() ![]() Damn, this is good, please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh, I'm trying so hard to be patient, but you are such a good writer, and you've made such an a-mei-zing (I know that was awful) story I just can't wait for more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I NEED MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! I LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a fantastic start to it. Especially with the preflight crush revelation. Certainly different from how a few of the others prefer to have them together beforehand. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, well, soldier... Delightful. This was utterly delightful. Oh so delightfully sweet, bittersweet and dramatic. Yeees~! *O* I just love this backstory for Tracer and Widowmaker, meeting long ago, as Lena and Amélie, years before the events of the "Alive" cinematic short. The interactions between Tracer and Widowmaker were like night and day from Lena and Amélie, and the fact that Tracer is falling harder in love with Widowmaker, the Black Swan, than she did Amélie, the White Swan...yeees. I absolutely adore it. *O* I love this and I can't wait for more~! This is gonna be wonderful! *O* Mission Start! Semper-Fi! Carry on! |
![]() ![]() Come baaaaack please. I need more ; A; |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read it. LOVE every word! The backstory you created for Lena and Amelie is very sweet and heartwarming, yet very tragic. I really hope you continue this beyond the one-shot, would love to see them hopefully and finally get to explore their feelings for one another. |