Whoa...just...whoa. Heart wrenching, tear-jerking and very macabre all at once. Beautiful; haunting, but very well written. I lost my brother a few months ago, so it probably wasn't the best idea for me to read a deathfic, but I'm still glad I did; I'm going to cry forever anyway.
Excellent work.
Though I will admit, I feel like a little bit of a freak, because right in the middle of my tears flooding my face, I actually laughed a bit when Danny told Steve that he needs to put his blood back so he can get better. I don't know if you were aiming for comic relief right in the middle of grief, but you nailed; at least in my personal opinion you did.
I look forward to coming across more of your works.

This was amazing. Truly a terrific piece of writing. You have a gift to be able to say so much with a few words. The pain and heartbreak, the courage and fear, the love and sadness were all so palpable.

That was so sad. Good but sad.

Welcome... Enjoyed your first endeavor.

Welcome to the world of Hawaii Five-0 fanfiction. Loved this. A great piece of writing. The title gave away the fact that this was a death fic. Most writers give readers the heads up in the synopsis if there's a major character death. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

Very, very well written. Excellent job but very sad. Made me tear up. Poor Danno, poor Steve. Write more!

Yikes! Wish you had warned it was a death fic. Poor Danny, poor Steve...

I love the way you incorporated the time! And the cargo pants made me laugh! This is so sad, but beautiful. Keep writing, coffeeamdcargopants ;) ~Aria