| Reviews for Anomaly: Book One: Beyond Forgiveness |
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LionessOfTrebond chapter 8 . 3/8/2018 This is exactly the fic I was looking for. I love seeing sans' jokester side and his terrifying timeline-curator bringer-of-justice side as well. I do wish that sans would have more varied mannerisms from canon, though-for example, he seems to say "you're going to have a bad time" a LOT, but doesn't seem to wink at all or use as many of the various nicknames like "bucko" or "buddy" or "kid" as he does in the game. I absolutely love all of the surprises you throw at us readers. I'm hanging on your every word, not knowing what terrifying plot twist comes next! P.S. The sequel to this was highly recommended on TVTropes, but I figured I'd read this one first. |
Tramon81 chapter 13 . 3/4/2018 Sans: you're fused with me, right? Frisk: Who were you expecting? Sporteflop? |
Mernom chapter 20 . 10/13/2017 Can't say I liked this very much. With how rushed the adventure ended up being, it didn't really convey the feels that well. |
Mernom chapter 14 . 10/13/2017 Frisk made one big mistake: Befriending is not something that you can rush. Except Papyrus. With him, the faster, the better. |
Mernom chapter 13 . 10/13/2017 It's becoming one big clusterfuck. Giving a partial truth is bound to cause some complications, especially with a sensitive subject like this. |
Mernom chapter 4 . 10/13/2017 Well, I kinda expected that. Let's see what else is new! |
Mernom chapter 3 . 10/13/2017 ... Didn't she say she won't kill? Unless it's not what it looks like. |
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 20 . 8/19/2017 That was a crazy ride. Ima go read the sequel now lol. (Also, I've used this site for nearly 10 years and only now am hearing about the hide bio button. I feel so dumb XD) |
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 19 . 8/19/2017 Oh my gosh Chara's gone I can't .. Oh man my heart. I'd grown too attached. Ahhhhh fluffy goat kid monster is hungry lol I wanna feed him a carrot. |
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 18 . 8/19/2017 I'm really curious about what happened on Alphys and Undyne's date now XD 0-0 woah. Chara got dem snazzy powers. |
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 17 . 8/19/2017 Aahhhhhhhhh why did this chapter stab me in the feels? Low-key fluff at the end there. Omg it got me good XD |
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 16 . 8/19/2017 I am a fan of Dadster. I am a fan of Handplates. What I am not a fan of, however, is faster controlling Sans' body like a marionette. (High-key fan of this fic tho holy calzone I love this fic XD) |
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 15 . 8/19/2017 (Low-key curious how far Sans can throw a snowball lol) |
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 14 . 8/19/2017 Lol Alphys is seriously sus (then again, anyone who knows Flowey origins would see Alphys as sus anyways XD) Since this is a completed fic, I won't post random theories until book 2, since it won't really matter at this stage. I love how you enjoy reading our reviews though. It makes me feel like the fic's reviews matter, you know? |
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 13 . 8/19/2017 SANS NEEDS TO TAKE A CHILL PILL LIKE YO CALM IT DOWN ON THE KID SMASHING Lol I love how Sans of this timeline is like an uber jerk and I have the opportunity to get annoyed. It's fun :D |