I love your take on the episode OMG! and Danny being added felt so seamless. the signs of amazing writing. great job!

Phantom didn't BECOME Dark Phantom until AFTER he merged with Plasmius.
This is on my profile, but I'm putting it here.
"I've always wondered why everyone says that Dan is Danny's evil self. Danny's ghost half was in serious pain, not evil. It was when he fused with Vlad's ghost half that he became evil. So that means that Vlad's ghost half was the evil one, not Danny's. So why does everyone, the Observants, Clockwork, Danny, EVERYONE, blame Danny and his ghost half for the evil stuff? ? ? ? That has never made any sense to me. Sure, Danny set off the course of events that created Dan Phantom when he considered cheating, so I can see why he blames himself (and why the Observants blame him, they're morons), but it was STILL Vlad's ghost half that made Dan evil."
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Okay, now that my Pet Peeve has been addressed, time for my review.
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I LOVE this story! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! OXD
It's AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! OXD
Please, PLEASE, tell me you haven't abandoned this story! ! ! !
I would seriously cry if you did! O:(
I understand if it's just taking time, because Real Life got in the way. That's fine, but PLEASE don't abandon it! ! ! !

Um, I thought Danny couldn't stand being called 'Dan'?
Also, doesn't Danny have increased hearing, or was that only in fics?

I LOVE how Danny changed the way this fight played out! ! ! ! OXD

I really hope Sam and Tucker will be able to get strong enough to work with Danny, and hopefully the rest of the team, more. I don't like when Sam and Tucker get left completely on the sidelines for stories like this. It makes it seem like they're unimportant and can't do anything majorly helpful.

I've been meaning to mention that 'hanger' (where their various modes of transportation are kept) should be 'hangar'.

I like this story so far and I'm really looking forward to seeing where it goes!

...please more

Maravillosa historia, me encanta como tratas de establecer las relaciones entre maestros y aprendices. Excelente trabajo.

para nao, muito boa a historia

Wow this is great!

i laughed so hard at the "B00" line, you dont understand. oh my god i was CRYING it was so funny. bless u omfg
this is pretty great so far! excited to see where this goes!

I really like where ur going with this and definitely love seeing new ideas- you are so creative! Please update this though: it’s been like 8 months or something crazy like that.

First half of this chapter sucks unfortunately. You instantly nerfed everyone, lame.

Love it you need to post the next chapter soon I'm living in suspense!

I really hope you are continuing this! It's awesome!

PLS more chapters!?)!?