Reviews for Remnant's new ACE hunter
NibberWithAHardR chapter 2 . 8/10
Let me guess, he's now a Logia in the same way that Teach is with his Yami Yami no Mi.
Mrtyu666 chapter 2 . 8/4
*sigh* Well you could have just made Signal a highschool. RWBY is made by Americans after all.
Reinhard van Astrea chapter 11 . 4/20
What happen to the chilling chapter 12?
808Joker808 chapter 7 . 4/8
So I know you've already stated the pairing is Ace and Yang but I just gotta ask if you could consider adding Pyrrha. It don't have to be a harem, just Yang and Pyrrha is good. I just feel their dynamic could be great, not to mention in most these stories Pyrrha is always paired with Jaune. Nothing against Jaune but cannon can be so overplayed sometimes. Anyways just a thought.
CILinkz chapter 3 . 3/28
i really really hated that chapter. how he caved in with Qrow was pathetic
Asumodeus chapter 4 . 3/15
AP Classes, nerd... jk jk.

I am really curious about what Aces weapon will be like. I am imagining a bo staff, as that is what he used in earlier years, maybe hollow so he can maybe channel his fire through it to make a fire spear or smth.

I hope he makes his waterboard thing he uses for solo travel. That things is damn cool.
Asumodeus chapter 3 . 3/15
I doubt Ace would have show any fear towards anyone threatning his own life, if it was someone he cared about I could see him showing fear, but mostly anger.
Also think it would have been wiser to have his DF be his semblance istead of just a straight up DF, could have just made the situation awaken his aura and then that he got access to his power.
Other than that, I am enjoying the story.
808Joker808 chapter 11 . 3/4
Just caught up and gotta say this is real good stuff you have going. Hope you find your drive.
DarkHurrijan chapter 11 . 1/13
Ah, I had almost forgotten about Marineford. Thats gonna be a suffocating story for the girls. I wonder, will the girls tell Ace that Pyrrha knows the story know and will he tell it now to all of them? And Ace being embarrassed about Blackbeard is going to be hilarious. I can just see him muttering under his breath about it while telling them.
Galieiah chapter 11 . 1/11
Ahhh I can’t wait until they see his “semblance” I wonder, will he first show it off at the school or somewhere else? And he doesn’t have an actual semblance does he? I think it would just negate his fire and Hali abilities. Will he get the nickname Fire Fist Ace again? I love this fic, please find time to update.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/11/2019
I must say that I love this story. I got super excited when I saw that you uploaded. You are the only crossover fanfiction I can find that is on going and makes Ace act like how he’s suppose to. And you don’t dumb him down or anything. I was wondering if you were going to mention Sabo or not.
Raltol Lotlar chapter 3 . 8/25/2019
Just stoped reading after Ace explained everything...
I just saw it coming, they (specially Qrow) are observing a 6-7 year old kid and when he finally gets his memories back he is confronted, never before it. And then he goes and just tells everything to a drunk guy he knows for 6(?) months and that only visits every blue moon?
WTF! I mean, he is a worst case than an alien, because he is still human, so why not do the Dumbledore (Ozpin), experiments (Ironwood), or maybe kill/recruit (Salem)?
So lets paint a BIG bullseye in my back because less than a day of my secret expose that the people knowing it is already x7...
Its sad, I liked the story but just cant go with that.

Anyway, great job with your story and thanks for sharing it.
Raltol Lotlar chapter 2 . 8/25/2019
WTF is wrong Qrow and Ozpin stalking a 6 year old kid? I though they would be more interested investigating Summers death, the Maiden disappearance, Salem, etc. instead of a kid. That's just creepy.

Nice chapter besides that.
Raltol Lotlar chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
Just from the start it was weird... What do you mean with Ace saw a man that was "obvious from asian descent"? Its like him saying "Jesus!" when surprised. If you dont write the character as it is with his education, quirks, likes and origin, then you have an OC with a famous name. There is no different races, languages, or even barriers in One Piece for him to know things from earth. (The same applies for Remnant)
Its like Naruto, they speak and write in Japanese, but 60% of them dont look like that, they dont live in Japan nor on earth, so even them recognizing someone asian is stupid.

Maybe Im ranting because I just didnt like how Ace ended there, if Monty could do that then he could do whatever he wanted for years, fix or destroy things as he wants. So him doing this suddenly one time because of a whim or a mood after YEARS of Remnant developing into what is now without interference doesnt make sense, him being able AND taking souls from other universes even less. And finally, him being a god, what does the "The Gods of Light and Darkness" paint here as that its said they created and later destroyed humanity?
So why not just a blank timeskip and leave it to imagination like many do? You dont enter all that mumbo-jumbo inexplicable stuff.

Besides that, it looks interesting. I just hope Ace doesnt become to much an OC
guest chapter 11 . 8/19/2019
good story I hope you can continue Two Kinds of Souls that stories also pretty good
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