Well Gord . it just proves that the author and Ichigo are more mature than you.

Damn

Then why don't you fucking write. And tell us your story. Oh wait you don't have a account, you don't have any ideas, you don't even fucking know how to write. Ha! Can't even dare to create an account or can't even write it in an account. So fucking wimp. Ha! . Come on you haters send me all your complains to my account. I dare all of you.

Ignore the prick Gord two comments below, clearly this guy hasn't read the full series you wrote prior to posting this one shot and is toxic as hell cus he didnt get what he wantedike when a rowdy child doesn't get his candy lol
Keep on writing the way you do, Ive read all the stories you've written and I am entertained like many of us are.

Cheers

This was a heartbreaking one shot that was very well done

garbage, you should of never paired him with her, she has to much worthless baggage, also ichigo fills fake, whats with authors making there main characters into such saints, nobody's that much of a saint, where's the jealousy the anger, this one shot should have pushed him farther away from her, not closer, i guess if i want a story more realistic i'll have to write it my self

great chapter keep it up

A really great chapter

nice one-shot.

The forgotten language thing when Tiamat is eating the cake doesn't really make sense. Ichigo should be able to understand; he's a devil and they understand any spoken language. As far as we know from canon, this pertains to ancient languages as well.

A beautiful tale, now Ichigo needs to take her to Italy and introduce her to ice-cream and pizza to cheer her up

Thanks.

;)

Loved the chapter, some good backstory

YES. That is all I have to say.